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Dude gets ROB'd from his world but atleast he gets some wishes out of it
My first fanfic. This has been dropped long ago. Please note it has not been revised once after being dropped, I just left it as is to see my progress from complete crap to half decent.
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Viết đánh giáI didn't find it interesting it was unfunny and just allround boring as hell ..................................................................................
Shamelessly giving myself 5* Just writing this to kill time as I wait for other people's novels to update I could really use criticism as I am also writing this for some criticism and feedback
You will laugh your ass off if you read this. It may be short but it's so funny. You have an overpowered Mc. A small harem. Sure it's got some random stuff but every bit of that randomness is hilarious.
The story had good potential but was not able to fulfill it. The story and chapters feel rushed and not fully thought out. Not to mention jumping to other words without fully setting a sound base in the first. The mc personality changes so quickly between being serious to being playful or childish that readers can’t take his actions seriously. Also the story changes so quickly between being serious to playful that it ales suspenseful moment lose their edge. In the end this seems to be a story that is meant to be light hearted and not too serious. This story seems to be more fun than serious and dramatic
Go to the dxd world just to be a secondary character who trains Issei and sends all the women ... ..........................................................
I like it so 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Tiết lộ SpoilerAbsolutely amazing! I love how each chapter is sometimes in itself its own little episode. I can’t wait for more disguises and shenanigans bro!
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Writing Quality:4 Stability Of Updates:3 Story Development:I would give zero if I could. Character Design:3 World Background:2 This is NOT worth reading.
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The story is good though it doesn't have many development but the comedy is really nice so please don't drop this and continue.
Tiết lộ SpoilerThis was a pretty interesting chapter This was a pretty interesting chapter This was a pretty interesting chapterThis was a pretty interesting chapter \
Tiết lộ SpoilerTác giả dervishscyth
Why i rate this one star ? I dislike Issei, I dislike Issei, I Dislike Issei i dislike issei i dislike issei i dislike issei. And chanting it with a different yet the same meaning. I hate issei, i hate issei, i hate issei i hate issei i hate issei. I dislike MC's Personality. He said he want to have a proper life ? A good life ? Peacefull life ? Then why bother to train some trash! Then why bother to help other ? Just giving his aunt (basically Rias) to Issei ? Fuck damn ****. I have never seen a sickness bastard gave his own aunt to Some perverted bastard that want to become a harem king. Am i wrong ? Or what ? All in all I JUST HATE ISSEI!! no matter what, if the story goes with the MC's teach Issei and more even give him girls i will definitely put one star. Uneless you gave an interesting plot like the one that i read from Fanfiction, (if i'm not mistake, it goes with Runes) then i'll give more star. (The term of "like" doesn't mean to be the same but almost similar)