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Born as the emperor's first-born child. An abomination twice over, the Order of Bene Gesserit would move to kill this anomaly. Prophets aren't so easy to kill, especially a false one.
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Peak fiction, as it was written, lisan al gaib. Do not drop, we must see the golden path. My one critique is that you post too slowly, I am impatient. Your healing asoiaf fanfic was great too.
this has a great premise. i saw how on another side this story got a bit target by people critizing its"realism" and all. Which is funny when you are talking about a fictional universe in the first place... So to the author: dont listen to the trolls. You are writing a solid developing story that makes me check daily for updates!
a great story with intriguing writing and an excellent plot. i really hope you keep going with this.
Well a good fic from Bum author.. Well bum one can destroy this fic like ll the other's. ..............................................................................................................................
Plot given enough time to unravel, and mc motives are justified. Some typos here and there, but nothing too devastating. So far very promising.
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👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍me encantó muchas gracias por tu increíble historia... Ya quiero ver que papel tendrá paul en todo esto ............... .. ........................ ............................ .............. ............... ............. .... ................... ................ .... ............. ..... ......... ..........
The story is AWESOME 😎👍 Except for a few spelling mistakes everything is 👍 good. I don't know about the chapter stability as i just started reading it but I'll wait and see. All in all it's worth it!.
La historia es increíble es asombrosa 👍🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
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PLEASE READ,I never leave reviews as they are not helpful to readers only writers but I must see this creation prosper. So far, the story has been great, with the only Grammer being the misuse of a word or two and forgetting to use the plural version instead of singular.