Dragonball: A Human's Tale

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CrossCounty

Turn back immediately if you’re reading this. It’s not too late. You still have time. -WARNING- The author is extremely retarded The Mc is born a human so he takes advantage of his meta knowledge and starts training around 3 years old with Roshi, goes to Korin tower, Trains under Popo..the whole package, years before goku would find his way there. He uses shenron to enhance/buff himself repeatedly. Increase his max ki level, increase his ki training rate, increase his talent and potential. Goes to namek and gets Guru to unlock his latent potential and uses the namekian dragon balls. Asks for the same things. Increase max ki, training rate, potential...etc..repeatedly again. Learns instant transmission along with some other techniques. Goes back to earth and drinks the ultra divine water. By this point he has been training himself for nearly 2 decades and his power level is at a satisfactory 1.5 million. Then he meets a normal human girl living by herself in the wilderness and takes her along with him on his journey to space and decides to train her. After a year of training her, his power level is at 2 million and her power level is 1.9 million. I think I got to my point. It doesn’t get better in future chapters either...oh nooo...the human girl still without any of his buffs goes on to surpass him by at least 100 million in power level. I dare say that this is the stupidest thing I’ve ever read an author do. And I’ve read A story where the author gave nerfs after nerfs after nerfs after fucking nerfs to his Mc that he wouldn’t be satisfied until he nerfs even his own mother out of existence.

LV 14

Aeternabilis

alright novel ruined by the oc luna and obvious holes like above obvious... author brings her outta no where and makes her stronger than the mc instantly. They eventually go on 'dates' we dont see and get together. Now shes already 100mil stronger than him but he wins still because author says so. Many other things to do with this aswell. Acc liked the story even with its many plot holes it was fun to read but you have to put a line somwhere and it all went to sht when he met luna. So read up to there and drop... id suggest just leave cause its waste of time if your into long stories. If want something short its okay.

LV 13

Tizon

Even though MC is human the author made the story flow well. It was a fun read and hope author continues to improve 😁👍🏻 .................... .....................

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michael7022

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LV 5

Niceface

Luna estragou a história,o personagem principal treina a vida inteira pra chegar onde chegou e ela em um ano quase alcança ele, vai se ferrar

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Piotr_Uklejewski

******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! *************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************

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DragonGod999x

You should change your title from a human's tale to yuudai the strongest trainer of z fighters because his power level is just higher than others but far weaker than his wife and goku wew you should put a variant to him bro make him at least have a little less power level than his wife and more powerful than the others because he is the mc bro and maybe make a revalatio that there is other races more powerful than saiyans and frost demons and that' where he and his wife came from they are powerful variants as well fck up the story plots because you ruined it now hahahaha But still a good story though

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Rukimedsu

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LV 5

Unchainedx

A medium novel, the DB universe is very interesting so the author deserves credit for the choice, unfortunately the novel has several problems: Expressionless characters, annoying dialogues, MC's interaction with other characters is poorly done, the protagonist did not get directly involved with the DB universe timeline, the changes he made are minimal, relationship with the character Luna is poorly written, they spent years together, but the dialogue scenes between them are nonexistent, the fighting scenes are not well written, the vast majority of chapters are from MC training, I like to see the training, but unfortunately they are poorly written, the level The protagonist's power is inconsistent, he gets strong very fast and his power increase no longer amuses me, it has reached a point where only numbers are thrown to the reader. The luna character being more talented than the MC is normal, she is apparently not human, the protagonist is limited by his race, but the author preferred giving random an bad powerups to the MC because readers didn't like Luna being more talented than him. ... An author can listen to his fans, but an author should not do everything his fans want, the author of this novel care so much to what people say and the story is shaped by the demands of the readers, it was bad for the novel. The author is evolving, and if you correct these errors and especially stop writing everything readers ask, then this novel will improve a lot.

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Ryan_Nguyen_4639

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FaizalMashon

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alesjandritos

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LV 14

WolfLord

So far are very interesting read can't wait to find out what happens with twists and turns the author put into it I do like that he's not overpowered instantly

LV 10

TheLordOfOrcs

Its a story like all the other dragonball fanfics but with some surpises. Its a good story to pass some time. But it lacks some charachter development and the world background. I give it a 3.75/5.

LV 14

Arcan1987

Thanks for the chapter's and i wont more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Monster_Paradise

Nice, I want to see how far a human can go. Though, I would never use a human, its working here and it different. Maybe there should be like super human form or something, I don’t know 🤷‍♂️. Good novel overall though. 😤

LV 3

Old_school

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Autumn_Halder

This is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood