Draco Malfoy, The Champion of the Magical World

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Magna_Prime

I had only read one female harrypotter x mc story and that was Adam Black the grand sorceror, truely a magnificent book, this one has potential to surpass that one, I am very much looking forward to reading what you have in store, just dont drop.

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Splendora_Gaming

Shameless author review, lol. I've tried to make it very good, but since I wanted to speed through the MC's childhood, the first 5 chapters are pretty fast-paced. Chapter 6 onward is where times passage slows down and I concentrate more on the story and not just getting to an older age where he can do more. Note that I may periodically accept reader suggestions. Chapter 6 in particular was written in response to suggestions that seemed pretty popular, so I went with it. Note, though, that I am trying to keep it for general audiences, so some suggestions that would necessitate increasing the rating will be vetoed. I hope everyone enjoys the story.

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Kurosis

so far so good. Its a fun read light hearted and Mc will obv be OP as fk. hope you don't drop this... ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Insane_Pumpkin

Damn that's a first time that i give a 5 stars for writing quality but 1 for the rest... i mean excluding the idea and very good writing quality it was a tragedy... not mentioning making a harem of less then 10 years old girls, ugh... Author didn't care about original age of characters where we have him sending letters to gabriele that's 1 year old at that time. There is completly no consequence of any action taken by MC... His harem is growing at a speed where it includes girls he didn't even meet yet. He just tells all secrets and does what he wants without any preparation or fail safes... And considering what i seen there will be solid nerf of MC as he is high above human limit when it comes to strenght, agility etc... The entire story is like MC is in a AU where everyone is happy, no one is plooting, the dark side of the world don't exist and MC gets everything he wants with the power of Plot Armour riding a unicorn on a rainbow with his extremly underage harem...

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PUJIT_FADTE_9415

NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT (7 CHPA/WEEK)A SELFISH SUGGESTION 😋

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Jesus_Mieses

This novel is very well developed however i would enjoy if the Mc could get more mature women in his harem such as Bellatrix and some others. The character design is great while the world background is fine the stability of updates is frequent which is good and the writing quality is good can be improved from small mistakes, but this novel shows the hard work the author puts into it so i hope the author can keep up the incredible work and thank you.

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Jesus_Mieses

The writing quality is good, but the stability of updates could be more frequent unless the writer likes to relax then that's fine. the story development is great, but i'd like to know if the Mc would only go towards the female students like Ginny, Daphne, Astoria, Gabrielle, Fleur, Hannah, Susan, Luna, holly(Harry), Cho, and the Parvati twins. Is it possible for him to get ***** women to or no such as Bellatrix and can he be with Tonks as well because Bellatrix needs happiness to.

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yusril002

Seboga novel ini tdk di jatuhkan terlalu cepat dan seboga lebih di percepat mengunggah bab dengan bantuan batu daya😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇

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Kurumi21

Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

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AlexTravels

Potential is there, keep up the good work! Have some reservation about Hermione(because of her character in cannon), like it so far though. Especially Greengrass' sisters, very good choice I say! Approved!

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Hybrid_Zer0

There are some things that I just don’t quite like about these kinds of stories truth be told but I have nothing against the writer. Otherwise the writing is good and I like the setting.

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Daoist721221

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Cameron_Halliwell

I don’t even know how to explain how much I love your book I literally just downloaded it today and Im already finished it I’m already on the last chapter I can’t wait until you update again please do it soon.

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Obsideon

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Keonia_Jarrett

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Misterio6676

Muy buen capítulo y amigo si puedes subirlo más seguido sería mejor , ummmm interesante las opciones que propones ; la primera es en el mundo de pokemon y la segunda es en el mundo de Marvel DC , ummmm bueno la decisión es muy fácil sería Marvel la "opción 2" además sería más divertido por las batallas y los poderes de Fénix sip mucho mejor.

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Jesus_Mieses

The writing quality is great and showed amazing improvement as the stability of updates is going well. The stories development is going at a good pace and its very enjoyable at the current rate of progress. The character design is perfect and well written while the world background is great thanks for the great work.