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Synopsis: [Odd Double] Also Known As The Odd Eyes Gauntlets a mid-Tier Longinus That Can Double The Damage Dealt By the User upon Impact
Little Is Known About [Odd Double] And Sakaki Yudai Will Unravel It Secrets.
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Viết đánh giáWell it's the first time I see a DXD fic with the odd-eyed pendulum dragon that is from YU GI OH, I'm a big fan of that series, so I'll give it a chance, I'll be seeing how this story unfolds in future chapters if you decide to follow her and don't leave her halfway...
Seems to be just a replacement of issei’s role with an original sacred gear based off odd-eyes pendulum dragon as well as its effect to double damage to opponents. The writing quality leaves much to be desired, grammar mistakes pop up a lot. And either someone is practicing their writing with English being a second language. Or someone translated this from a different country. All together. The idea this fanfic brings would be very interesting but the execution here leaves much to be desired
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The story starts out good but the more you go into it you start to notice that the mc is just replacement for the main character in dxd. I suggest you take some creative liberties and make some stuff up because the way the story is going I’m just rereading dxd but with a new mc -I’ll keep reading future update just to see if there is any changes