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Seido High. This is one of the powerhouse schools in Tokyo. A place where the best players gathered and formed a team. However, it has been a long time since they went to Koushien, and that makes people think the giant had fallen.
This year, things seemed to be different. They had several talented newcomers joined the team. Two pitchers with their unique style and one monster hitter came out of nowhere. If things went in a normal way, they would be able to reach the Koushien stage in their second year.
However, what if there was someone who could fasten their progress in advance? Someone who could be a mentor and guide them to become better players? Here comes Hiroto Suzuki, the cool and popular senpai in Seido. His name soared to the sky in his first year as one of the best hitters in Tokyo, probably second only to his captain, Yuuki Tetsuya.
He is respected as a talented player by his senpai, hailed as a leader by his peers, and admired by his kouhai as a mentor. Even though he isn't a pitcher, he could still influence the game with his presence. So, the question is, with the addition of Hiroto, how far Seido could go?
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the story has an original main character but does not focus on the MC the story focuses on Sawamura so change the fanfic name to Diamond no Ace: suck Sawamura b*lls and be an Extra basically is this. Now
I’ll agree to the other reviewers. However, they could’ve been more constructive and less rude floor how they put it. We are here to see what your character does, not other characters. I get how it can be difficult but it’s the truth. If you need more content for your MC then give him a romantic relationship. Focus on specific friendships, how there is strain on some friendships because of the ruthless selection for the first string ect. Overall it’s not bad. But let’s focus on your character everyone else are background.
Writing Quality is great, Character design is also good, but the only problem is this story doesn't focus on MC at all, in all 31 chapters MC gets less screentime than all the characters, even with all these we have to wait for 1 week for the new chapter.
Finally there is a new fanfic about DnA. I hope your novel will have a good ranking
Por el momento me parece bien algo fresco nada de sistemas me parece bien y sobre todo se entiende perfectamente la lectura me gustaría q fuera un poco más largos los caps pero está muy bien
Can’t get behind this fic. Don’t know why it focuses so much on Sawamura instead of developing the MC. It’s like the mc is a side character