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Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God
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A fantastic novel, until today I had only read one novel set in the TOG universe, this is the second, and I have to say: It is (so far) one of the original novel's that I liked the most, honestly I feel the author evolving, The first's chapters the author was very stuck with the original work, so we see repetitions of dialogs that could be avoided, but now I feel that he "get away" from the original sequence, and that was great, the writing took a tremendous leap. the MC is interesting, he's not a hero willing to sacrifice himself for other people, but he's not a bloodthirsty villain, he doesn't mind killing his enemies (which is very good), the powers are very interesting, and a Good point is that the author does not try to force other powers from the OP universe to the MC, is excellent as it is. One of the big problems when writing an original novel from an existing universe is that the authors make MC as a viewer, changes in the plot are minimal and the existence of MC is null. Here I feel that MC is important, that he is the true protagonist, the other characters know of his existence, and he is linked to the universe of TOG. The novel is going great, I had to do this review, don't drop this novel ... Never. One more thing: The novel is yours, the idea has come from you, the popularity is rising because you proved capable, I'm reading a lot of reader comments asking for: "changes" "he has to make ..." "make him do it ... "" give him this power ... "" Make it a Harem ... ", you can do that if that was your original idea or if you honestly think it will be good for the novel, the novel will not improve if you do what the fans ask. Keep up the wonderful work.
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This story is off to a beautiful start too often do I see mc’s with a good all around personality when we all know just how dark humanity truly is I’m genuinely excited to see which direction you take this Story but keep it classy and stay with the gore that **** is lovely 10/10
The author tried to portray the MC as cocky which just made him seem annoying, the typical nacissist guy. Moreover...top assassin at 17 yrs? Really :/ ? (Also, he doesnt behave like an assassin at all; more like someone with 8th grade syndrom) **Find an unknown attractive girl** "Will you go on a date with me if I win the bet? (while grinning ofc) :/ This is an assassin for you.. The start of how the story was introduced, with the thugs (chapter 1), was just horrible and cringe in my opinion; completely unnecessary and making the MC even more edgy. The story later also seems to go further into him becoming a trainer and a slice-of-life kind with action. If the MC was not so unlikable then it would be a lot better, but I cant bear to read with this f*cking annoying personality od his that makes me hate him even more every time. I hope that everytime that someone comes he will get beaten until near death to take away that annoying cockiness from him. If not for his character/personality it would be good. His character just take away all the other good parts of the novel making it unbearable.
Dropped dropped dropped dropped .. But if you like mc that is just a pawn then go read this.. And he became a masochist in chapter 14 maybe or 13 . Dignity,pride? Mc doesn't need that lol.. He will even lick your feet if you teach him something.
Exp blacker than black and darker than dark, I beseech thee, combine with my deep level. The time of leveling cometh. Justice, fallen upon the infallible boundary, appear now as an intangible distortion! Dance, Dance, Dance EXP! I desire for my torrent of level a destructive exp force: a destructive force without equal! Return all creation to cinders, and come from the abyss! Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION!! ----------- Oh, EXP shrouded in light Frenzied blaze clad in night In the name of the crimson demons, let the collapse of thine origin manifest. Summon before me the root of thy power hidden within the lands of the kingdom of demise! Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION! ------ Crimson-black blaze, king of EXP sect, though I promulgate the laws of nature, I am the alias of destruction incarnate in accordance with the principles of webnovel creation. Let the hammer of exp descend unto me! ... Burn to ashes within the crimson. By my efflux of thousands exp, topple this level barrier ! Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION! ------ The tower of exp creeps upon man's world, The unspoken faith displayed before me, The time has come! Now, awaken from your slumber, and by my madness, be wrought! Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION! ------ EXP... EXP... EXP... Wielder of the most glorious, powerful, and grand exp explosion magic, My name is d!ckbutt. The blow that I am given to strike turns a blind eye to the fate of my kindred, rendering all hope of rebirth and anguish, and the model by which all forces are judged! Pitiful creature... Synchronize yourself with the red smoke, and atone in a surge of blood! Burst forth, EXP EXPLOSION! -Megumin Exp Explosion Chant(Cringe yeah, but its for EXP!)
Author this is really cool but just saying dont make the MC a good two shows but also not a bastard ok....Also make him a one man army I mean he already has really strong DF's so make him OP you..like easily stronger than all the cannon characters..maybe add some romance and fluff...and dont make the MC that requires teams or help but rather a one man army
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Its a tower of god fanfic and seems nice so far? So yeah... .................................................................................
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he is an idiot he only trains his teamates he just met wasting his time to strengthen them he is becoming more of a trainer I DONT RECOMMEND this really frustrating to read and he is really soft around girls he just let them bully him like a typical japanese beta mc he was supposed to be an assasin what a disappointment
Oh guys this fanfic of tower of god is one of good tower of god out here in this platform. I can say is worth your free time to read this. Although it's my first Long journey ever of the 3rd floor Lol,joke aside it's really good to read on your free time buddy. It's a story about a man got transferred to ToG world,and got a devil fruit ability and will learn Shinsoo. The girls she meet so far is : Androssi Anaak and Verdi. Yeah Versi that loli Lol. Wish Author Good Luck. .Your Amazing 'Saiko'-chan ~
TRASH FANFIC,TRASH AUTHOR, TRASH MALE LEAD. ASSASSIN MC BUT FIGHT LIKE A TANKER. HIS PERSONALITY IS PRETTY WEIRD, THE ANNOYING PART OF HIM IS THAT HE KEEPS TALKING TO HIMSELF BUT ITS ALL TALK NO ACTION. AUTHOR EVEN WANT A SLUT FOR BEING THE MC LOVE INTEREST THATS SO FVK UP DONT GET FOOLED BY ALL OF THIS 5 STARS
This fanfic is pretty good but I find the idea of giving the mc more than 1 devil fruit at the beginning too op, but still good in my opinion
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Writing Quality: Make no mistake, this is a generic wish-fulfillment fanfic so don't expect anything crazy going in. At the beginning, the grammar is horrible but it does improve later on. Dialogue is ok, doesn't really improve later on but it doesn't need to. Overall writing was okay but after the Lumen's (MC) "death", it started devolving pretty quickly. Lumen (MC): The author establishes the main character as an assassin before he was sent to the world of Tower Of God, probably for him to have a cold demeanor and not be phased by killing others in the Tower which is fine but Lumen, at the start anyway, acted like he was a mix of two characters. One the cold/dark killer MC the author wanted and two a friendly and cocky high schooler. I didn't really mind it, but after his "death" Lumen went full on edgy arrogant chunni mode which made the fanfic turn into a mess really. Story Development: A lot of the shit doesn't make sense. The fanfic is really inconsistent with how the world of Tower of God actually works, mainly the rules of the tower. The floor guardians are the ones who enforce the rules so when one of the rules is "rankers can't directly interfere with regulars in the tower" you can't have the MC just start fighting Rankers left and right. There are some plot holes too, like Lumen telling Yuri he didn't have her contact info when it was said they exchanged contact info, Lumen at the start was very skeptical about Baam's "death" that he theorized Baam being threatened by FUG into working for them but then somehow forgets and says he might kill him even after he talked to Jinsung and should have confirmed his theory, etc. World Background: With the amount of timeskips in ToG and how many floors get glossed over, that leaves fanfic authors with a lot of creative freedom. The highlight of the fanfic is probably how well the author can easily create and bring floors that haven't been explored in the official work to life. Characters: I really liked how most of the characters are portrayed by the author. Even his own original characters like Tiana and Diana are well written, almost every single character are in line with how they are in the manhwa. However, there are some characters that are OOC like Anak, in my opinion I think there's no way in hell Anak would think of Lumen like a brother, she might respect (hell even admire) him but Anak would no way treat someone like that just from being beaten by them and then getting trained by them. Also Urek is so OOC he might as well be an OC because holy **** did the author mess his character up. FUG is fucking joke in this fanfic, they may as well be called Team Rocket. Urek supposedly killed 2 slayers and one elder but since there are 4 vacant seats of the 11 slayers, who did Urek kill? It can't be Karaka or Yama because they get talked about afterwards (Yama) or show up (Karaka). The other 5 are sleeping and/or have unknown whereabouts (according to Baam) even if it was two of the other 5 they are probably either from the 2nd gen demons or are one of the ancient gods meaning Urek can't just "rip them to pieces" especially with an elder being with them. Overall: It's an ok read. I'm dropping it but that doesn't mean that potential readers should, give it a chance maybe you'll like it more than I did. Writing fanfics on series like ToG and One Piece is difficult because how amazing the official work is, I feel like the author has a good idea here but executed it poorly. If the Author decides to rewrite this fanfic, I will definitely give it a read though. Rating: 3-4/10
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It's been a long time since I started reading novels and fanfics, and this is one of those stories that I've loved since the beginning. Some may criticize some aspects of this story but for me it is one of the best stories I have read. I would love for the author to publish more chapters a day.
Very great novel simply good it author intigrated powers in a very good way and reading was very enjoyable and always waiting for next chapters. Need more chapters or mass release Thank you.
This is an awesome fanfiction. The MC is likable (slightly OP but not planet buster level). It has harem which is a bonus. Relationship between MC and the girls isn't shallow. So I recommend you to try this out, I'm sure you won't regret it.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked ) Seriously though, it's very good.