Danmachi: Bell Cranel adventurer extraordinaire!

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TheAntiAkumar

I've yet to get too far into this story, and I have no clue whether or not I will get much farther into this story, because the grammar is horrible.. Like I can handle the non-capitalization and extra punctuation like "!!!!!", but what I can't handle is the spelling mistakes like Fallowed, awaken instead of awakened, Bell instead of Bell's, fallowed after the man. They walked trough... TROUGH? I was reading this as I was typing the review and when I hit that line I had to close the book... Because no matter how good the story might MIGHT end up being, if the author consistently misspells that many words in a single sentence I just can't keep reading it.

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SORCERERSUPREME_7

Please move your novel in anime and manga section you will get more readers and reviews. I want you to continue this novel so it will motivate you if you will get reviews and power stones.....

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stinkclaw

it is weirdly rare to find a fanfic of danmachi as bell. ufdhxhfxhfdydutxugcgcugjgcjgxcjgcjgugcuxgugxjgxjgcugcugxjjgxugcgccucugfcggcxgxgx

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GustPigey

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ender258

love the story pls update it. i cant wait for the next chapter its been 8 months

really liking it, it doesnt follow canon but big plus bc canon is annoying and the characters in this fanfic are much more fun and its way more entertaining to see their interactions

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born_stupid

please keep updating. its really hard to find good danmachi fanfics and please don't drop it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.., ,., , , , , , , , , ,., , , , , ,

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S3GSS

yo when are you going to update because i don't want this fanfic to be dropped this is one of the best danmachi fanfic i have read

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BoTMaster

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Saber_

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Daoistu3nXy2

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Gabouwu

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the_banana_catfrfr

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RaikerOkamura

me gusta la historia tiene mucho potencial y es bastante original espero que no abandones la historia

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ShadowMonarch185

Well only chapter 23 so not really gonna put so much thought right now we will see where this is going ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Mushroom_king

I am liking this story its nice the interactions are nice if a bit wierd. I will admit the spelling could be better but so far the story is making up for it.

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Jer_Miller

this is really good filler- gshdhshbzgzhdbshsjnsnsjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjjdndbdbdhjdjdjdmejdjkqnsjdjkdksjsndjjdnd BFF djjdjehdhdjdjhejdidjjdjd

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ReMormius

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Sommerscave

This Story is Nice being thrown Into Danmachi with a system that has gacha and Trade Options only so far interesting especially because D¡ck Wizard Extraordinary and Bone Daddy are guests.