/ Huyền huyễn / Crushing flags and claiming the Villainess
Tóm tắt
After getting hit by the truck, Luke was reincarnated as a target character in a reverse harem game.
He was supposed to throw away his fiancée—the Villainess—and mindlessly follow the Protagonist.
A side character he was destined to be, however, even if Luke accepts his fate as a side character, he cannot let the Villainess meet with the same dead end.
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Additional tags: No yaoi, no yuri, no NTR. Obsessive character, possessive character, solo-romance, no harem, early romance, possible lemons.
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I really like this novel so far. The writing quality is great, and I like the main character and the female lead. I think it has potential, and I would recommend it.
Slow down with the new stories I can only read so many bangers at time. My coins and fast passes are already stretched thin as it is with all the stories I read😭.
I love it so far. It’s refreshing to see a good non harem novel on this app. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work author!!!
Author, I need more of thiiiiiiiiisssssssssss. Please update fast, otherwise...
I like this story.. Anyone would especially in this site full of Harem novel. It's good non-harem and Romance, Magic Fantasy based Story. Here's suggestion for you Author Change the Name and Cover into Something Good, Honesty I just clicked on this story to read reviews but after reading the Description, I thought of giving it a try and really liked it. Name and Cover seems like that of a Smut. I hope you will give this Novel an appropriate Name and Cover. Best of Luck, I hope this story doesn't get dropped and becomes popular. (Sadly I can't read more than free chapters because I am Broke.)
Story is good overall, just lacking world building and mc being too much of a simp.
Wont lie the story is very cheesy and cliche. But it’s one of those books that makes me smile after I read it. Everyday I just enjoy chapter which is uploaded. Cause I love the interaction between the mc and Valarie. Its just so darn cute and wholesome. If you just wanna feel happy when you read a book, I highly recommend it.
I read 36 chapters while writing this. Pros:- Fluffy Romance Yandere Sensible MC Wholesome Raiden shogun Cons:- No world building [like mc didn't even research about what this whole world is like flat or oval] Less fleshed out characters Needs more chapter
Just Sweet Novel. Two Yandere lovers. If you have read or watched Mobseka (Trapped in a dating Sim) , it's similar in starting but with Better MC. Only problem is Chapters are small and we need more chapters atleast 400 more.
with very interesting plot I am very excited to read more waiting for the next chapter author please update us daily. we will support everything we can we can .
good read so far mc pretty much begins with sad story only for 1 ch, I guess that was author's way of torturing us readers or give satisfaction when he rejects the girl. Mc quickly accepts idea of new life and doesn't dwell on past.
I’m really loving the diabetic romance, been looking for something like this. I’m very early on in the book so I hope the writing quality improves later on. I could really use some art to help picture what the characters look like. Also author can you please add some r-18 scenes too. It would just make it so much better. Now I hate r-18 scenes when there’s too many for no reason. But in moderation it makes reading so much more enjoyable. Like in this WN. I’m on like chapter 38 as of now and I hope they kiss soon
This was very good. The dynamic between Austin and the FL felt very smooth. Most importantly no character felt it was too dumb or two-dimensional. Though I do wish the author would leave his other works and just focus on this one.
I will try my best to keep an honest and fair review. First and foremost writing, quality is five stars there is only small problem here and there not worth to be mentioned. second : update stability which we don’t have any problem here too. three: and hear the problem begin the story development is very shallow and cliche was a couple of loop hole in the story which has been corrected. fourth: character design all the characters of the stereotype very shallow have no personality and no buildup on the personality let me simplify it for you the story take place inside a third rated game and the character are 2d and there is no role beyond this to the character for example the side character that has been kicked out of the school he didn’t explore his character beyond the fact that he is obsessive of the original protagonist you didn’t show why he’s so obsessive with her did he have trauma in his life or she remain him of his deceased mother or something like that. and if you want my opinion to improve the character design of the protagonist you can make the protagonist completely confused with the memory of the original bodies owner and he feel everything that that the original body owner feel from sadness to happiness to jealousy to everything and you can start from there and start building his character. Don’t need to make him the holy type protagonist that make no mistake. You can make him a jealous asshole. or an angry teen entering an Emo phase you don’t have to make your protagonist perfect because no one is perfect. fifth: there is little to none world building after 30 chapter I was expecting some kind of hint or explanation for the bigger world, but nop all you have is the Academy in two Kingdom and even if you explained one of these two either the academy or the kingdom Ali more than happy to give you 4 to 5 stars however there is mention that he is in the Academy with some very small explanation about the classroom infirmary and the boy dorm room example he going to his dorm room he gone to the classroom he goes to the infirmary and that is literally it as for the kingdom the author only mentioned two kingdom and the protagonist is the second son of one of those King on the side character who got kicked out of the school is the son of the second king I quite disappointing to be honest especially the character since it is at the end of the day a romantic novel is supposed to focus on character building and story development and the drama between them which I didn’t see at all all I see is the protagonist protecting his damsel in distress.
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I have so much to say but I'll keep it short. The main hooking point of the story for me is the softcore romance between the ml and fl. apart from that, the story doesn't start away from the main plot (revolving around mc and Valerie). Rather it branches out from there; which I think is a plus. The narration is better than the most, making it both immersive without unnecessary fancy words. The story gives exactly what it sells from the title and synopsis.. give it a read!
My only complaints about this novel is that there isn’t more and I would also like how in these cliche stories where the mc does a 180 the girl who ignored him starts to like him just hope that doesn’t happen here as id feel bad for Austin’s friend also hoping that other dude who knew what Parkinson’s was doing get found out and suffers a horrible fate🙏
I like this book because I love it. I love this book because I like it. All because Valarie. Hail cute girl.
This makes me smile every time I read it. Wholesome ass story with great characters. You won't regret reading this one
My first review on this book, and I gave three stars to world background for a reason. You will get an abundance of romance and fluff in this one, however it takes some time for everything to unfold. Like how many nations are there, what is the time zone and all. It will take some time but I will properly design the world. Next, my fight scene writing has improved with this novel so you won't get the worst ones here. About harem, then a strict no. I update daily so a five star there. You will find a few spelling and phrasing mistakes here and there, but it hasn't been a year since I seriously started writing so allow me some time to improve. I try to give proper depth to each important character. Yes, it will take some time, but since the novel isn't going to be like 1k chapters, you won't need to wait for too long. Anyways, thanks for reading. Ask me any questions you may have.