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【Life Restart Simulator】
[Enter the chapter "Ichinose Honami's Summer Reappearance"]
[Five talents have been randomly selected: a promise of a thousand pieces of gold, a handsome guy from Tokyo, a flower protector, a child from a famous family, and is under the control of the year]
【Simulation starts】
[Day 14: On the night of the fireworks display, you blocked the blade of Honami Ichinose that stabbed Megumi Karuizawa. Under the sad and shocked eyes of the two people, you died]
[This simulation has ended, please choose a talent to keep and bring it to the next simulation]
…………
[Achieve the ending: Bystander - human beings' joys and sorrows are not the same. We often ignore many causes, and all we can see are the effects]
[Achieve the ending: Symbiosis - The strongest relationship in the world is accomplices]
[Achieve the ending: Rescue——Then we agree here to go a long way together in the future]
On the day of real time travel, Kitagawa Ryo, who came to Tokyo Advanced Education Middle School, looked at the series of golden talents on his body and scratched his head and said:
"Um, but I have completed all CG and all endings."
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Viết đánh giáhonestly speaking.. my head hurts with the changing name so frequently... the story and world is very well developed but back to start, my brain lost cells just for the name.
The translator didn't even try .. this just makes my eyes hurt with the amount of Chinese names and phrases in it
stop posting chinese trash . . . . . . . . .........................................................................................................
The most frustratingly written story I have read the author tried to be mysterious and write in a new way but it just makes the whole story overly complicated without adding anything to the plot itself the constant changes in branching story lines with no real plot direction. The premis I surmise is to explain the the prelude and world building as the MC plays a phone game he downloaded building his character he will become later int he story by clearing the game but the narration is confusing and their is no breaks or direction in the story like of each chapter he will constantly change the viewpoint of the story between different story without explanation and with so many different branching plots without an amazing memory their is no way to follow. At this point I wonder if the plot of the story ever really does properly complete or we just accept it when the author himself mentions the completion via the game system. So in conclusion good premise terrible execution if their are people who actually enjoyed this hats off to you but I see no enjoyment in this torture of a story.
I do not know what happened. I do not I do not know what happened. what happened. I do not know what happened. I do not know what happened.
Man, it's really hard to read. I'm sorry to give such a low score, but the reading quality is even worse than low quality mtl.[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Why so freaking philosophical??? it makes my only two brain cells hurt. but gonna give 5* since it's so freaking difficult to understand, and it should mean it's for those guys with more brain cells than me. And stop changing names. It was so bad that I sometimes have to recall who the mc is
It's okay the story can be improved as long as you try adding your own idea and improve as you progress, as try fixing each paragraph that has a problem on addressing and pointing each character as they make conversation and monologue. I recommend you try experimenting on your novel and add more ideas to the story.
Ughh I hate translators like these, mfs dont even try and just copy paste the already existing mtl from others 🤢🤦🏻♀️
the way its written is confusing and the grammar might give you a headache but the story is actually pretty good so if your used to mtl then this should be a nice read for you. im not that far into the work so things might change (im talking about how the grammar and spelling of translated works change for the worse over time)
The storyline would be interesting if the way the plot line was explained and expanded wasn't so confusing. One minute, the mc is talking to another person, and then, for some reason, we need a plot point explained that will last a chapter or two. Next, we have an issue with periodic gender change of characters coupled with the spontaneous of the plot, which leads to a very confusing story. If redone and reworked, this story could end up being great. I love the concept and would enjoy being able to read a story like this if it wasn't so convoluted to the point of being unreadable. I believe the author can fix this and perhaps make a wonderful contribution to the fanfic community.
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at leat make the name of the characters consistent. its kinda hard to read. not about the grammar, more about the logic. to hard to understand