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"In the world of Caldrea, one man unravels threads of power, darkness and secrets."
Richard, an ordinary man with an extraordinary lineage, steps into the dance of shadows, his fate inexplicably reshaping the world around him.
On a quest to unearth his cryptic heritage and thwart an impending catastrophe.
Shadowy entities and adversaries lurk around every courner, determined to shroud Richard's journey in peril and obscure the truth.
This tale follows Richard's odyssey through mysteries, confronting unearthly foes, and discovering Caldrea's many long buried mysteries.
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8 chapters in, I genuinely enjoyed the story. There are no mistakes in writing, so there was nothing what would disturb me while I was trying to focus on the story. It’s really good and I took a liking in Richard, he is a well written character. Recomend 10/10!
With Samuel's arrival, the story has become livelier. Even though he is old, he manages to capture my interest. Richard also has a personality that I like, calm and not impulsive. I appreciate the quality of your writing. 🌟🌟
it was really well written, i was absolutely immersed!! i hope you keep up the excellent pace because curiosity has me on my toes right now!
Incredible writing clarity and precision! Choice of words were accurate, descriptions were detailed but not over the top, and the concept is interesting. I've honestly said "wow" several times and I kept checking if it's already chapter 6 because I want to read more. There were few grammatical errors and extra words in the first chapters, and paragraphs were pretty long but I've seen improvements in the latter parts. Keep up the good work and please continue writing. [img=update]
although the synopsis is short it surely is captivating and the author did a great job in the chapters released but I know there's still room for improvementplease work on your synopsis and check for some grammatical errorsexcept that your book is perfect^_^can't wait to read more
Already, your synopsis is intriguing. The way go in-depth through your description is pretty impressive. your quality is def. 5/5. though there are some parts where sentences get a bit cramped and hard to read. Still, its worth the read
Enjoyed every page of this novel! The world-building was impressive, and the characters felt real. A great read for any fantasy fan! Looking forward to more from this author! [img=recommend]
It’s very well written and very enjoyable! I love the intricate world building in this, unlike a lot of other Webnovels, you describe the politics and religion of this land, GREAT JOB!!
Good start. Looks promising. Just keep doing what you are doing, author. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
after reading the 5 chapters I can say the story has a great premise, but It still needs a little refining, and a piece of advice from me to the author is that divide the paragraphs into smaller paragraphs to increase readability, otherwise it will be less appealing and some people might lose interest, keep up author.
Here are 5 stars for your book. For absolute beginners, I must say this is quite good. [img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]