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Book 1 - My Mischievous Mate - Ethan [BL] [Complete]
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Running, jumping and gliding in the wind is what he does best. After leaving his pack to be with his father's pack due to his mothers' death, Ethan struggles to get along with the Alpha all to find out that they are mated, especially he and his wolf's perverted desires. Daily updates until completion.
Cover art by: the_nerd.artist
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Its a story with potential but keeping up with the POV is hard, theres no real dIrection is the story, and theres the fact that everything just suddenlys happens. no build up to anything and no real reactions from the characters to anything that happens to them.
hello, I have enjoyed reading the few chapters that have been up, i hope to see more, I quite like the characters, but I hope to see a little more description on their surroundings, like what it looks like. Thank you for possibly reading my review, and also keep up the good work!
The book is good but sometimes it’s hard to follow along with what is happening
SO much potential!!!! This would be a FANTASTIC story if there was a prologe or chapter or 2 before where this starts to give a little more background and character development. And then at least another 10 chapters to give it some solid story development and true completion.
i know it's a short story with only four chapters but you should continue it ... maybe until it reach 10 chapter .. it's to good and interesting to end it like that.. it makes me wonder what will happen to the both of them😍😍