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-- A small heads, early chapters have a quite bad grammar, I am fixing them asap, also the MC doesn't start as OP, he go through cultivation before it. --

"I always wondered until the day I died, why humans are such filthy creatures?"
A Noble status, money, and power were the things that ruled this world, but Aaris Ralkier had nothing since the day he was born.
His childhood was ridiculed by poverty and bullying by the nobles, hoping to change his world one day after becoming a great mage, his dreams were shattered because of his unique and miserable condition of possessing no mana.

What he had in his life was his mother, the lowest witch who never wanted anything but his happiness, but she was taken away by the hands of aristocrats and the kingdom that was supposed to protect them.

He lost everything, struggling to find his existence again he was betrayed and left to die at the hands of a dreadful demon and was framed even after his death.

Reminiscing his life on his last breaths, he decided to take the demon soul along with his with the spell his mother forbid for him, Blood Silk.

He lost his life too, but fate doesn't take mercy on him, his eyes opened once again, maybe a choice was given to him, suffer or fight.

Like cursed blessing in his body, he set out on a journey to find his existence, lingering regrets, and goring grudges, in the realm ridiculed with divine curses & diabolical graces, everything is laid in front of him to quell or win.

But red strings of fate only take it to weave a War, waiting to meet its End.




P.s:- English is not my first language I am still a fledgling writer.
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    Mel_Aniv

    REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were unnecessary spaces and mistyped spellings. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️

    3yr
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    Xeeraaruwa

    This is a great book with a promising storyline. I love books about and this one is actually amazing I would recommend it to anyone who loves books about magic and demons

    3yr
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    InsidiousMask

    it's confusing and has bad grammar, starts with a promising couple chapters and then changes and has so many boring chapters after that that makes me lose motivation to read would have been better if these boring chapters were broken up into "flashbacks" so that they didnt take the wind out of the story I'm sure for other people it was great, it seemed to have a strong concept, and a well planned out character backstory etc. but it definitely wasnt for me

    3yr
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    The_Procrastinator

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    3yr
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    Edel_Li

    Ideas are interesting and deserve development. Author, you do have imagination and this could be a promising story. Readers, you can give it a try! Now, here are a few points for the author: you need to proofread, use Grammarly or/and Antidote to check your sentences. Be careful of commas, suspension point and capital letter. The same goes for the dialogues. Pay attention to those points and it will be smoother ;) Keep going and good luck!

    3yr
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    shuujidazai

    Everything's perfect, I really enjoyed reading it. But if capitalization was used properly, it would have been much awesome! Looking forward to new chapters!

    3yr
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    Sfenky

    It seems like it could be a fine novel however the writing is bad. Instead of explaining the story, it is more like giving statements. And also due to that, the novel is pretty fast-paced which brings down the quality :/

    2yr
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    Ferjenni

    Almost perfect for me. The plot, the characters, the cliffhangers, the drama, the pacing, are all great! Only needs polishing but it's a hidden gem. All the best to the author, Sushi.

    3yr
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    Itx_Mahi

    The main Thing Which Attracted Me towards This Novel Is its Title "BLOOD SILK"😍😍 I really loved The Synopsis... I just read It N I Was In the World Of this Novel❤ Character Development Is Queit Nice...💖 This Book Is a masterpirce Which I Added To my Library Just after Reading First 2 chapters☺ Author is quiet Hardworking🤗 Best Of Luck to the author❤ Do write More chapterz My eyes R waiting fr them👀Hehe... Overall This Is Recommended To evryone😊

    3yr
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    3yr
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    Silent_Listener

    Wow, a story of weak to strong. Basically, character growth stories are the best. As they are mostly relatable. Good job author. Fighting. Best wishes to Arraris

    3yr
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    Mary_Algen_Guiang1

    Goodbye Verdos, I wish you a happy suffering! one of the coolest lines I ever heard. It is really so beautiful, it feels like I was being transported inside a psp game. I have never felt that feeling before given by reading a novel. I like this story, and if it's not too much to wish, I hope one day it can be converted into a game. I hope the author continues to write more chapters so that more readers can enjoy his story.

    3yr
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    eyaggelia146

    An interesting story that has a smooth progress and a nice flow. Multiple characters with different personalities. Suspense is steadily building up. Good job,keep going.

    3yr
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    J_Davids

    This story shows promise and excitement! I like how you portray the emotions for the main character and I like how the action goes. Though there are some grammar mishaps and spelling, it's got potential! 👌

    3yr
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    Rosnocht

    i scrolled, scrolled, scrolled and then when I saw it ends... MOTHER?! You know what? Your cliffhangers are so on point, i just... anyways, i know you won't let me down. Give me the next chapter soon!

    3yr
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    Bhar_Yo

    i love how the storyline grows and develops along with the growth of a character in the story as well with its deep-running connection building up throughout the story.

    3yr
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    Eaagles_wings

    Just a little through the introduction and the story pulls you in 😍, apart from those gramar and punctuation mistakes (which are totally curable) it takes so much promise into developing the character. ❤️ keep up the good work author-san

    3yr
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    YanHuanggua

    Everythings too good to be true. I see a lot of potential in you. Please never stop writing. Love from all my family too. My blessings are with you.

    3yr
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    CollinX_BrainZ

    To be sincere this novel, is pretty much interesting and unique right from it beginning. Just that it still need improvement, so as to develop it to a high standards. Overall, it really something new to me, and am curious to read it all .

    3yr
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    Insta0pubg

    Really author you are imagination is amazing. Character and story is like straight out of anime a hidden gem a must read. I am adding this to library for sure

    3yr
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