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Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator
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(A/N: Guys, I had THOUGHT of making this a two lovers story, and even had gave the readers the decision to choose, with the second lover being Drew Saturday. But I decided against it, since, 1: I hate harems or anything near it in modern world settings. 2: The unneeded and unnecessary drama needed to work it out with her would be annoying as hell. So for those that wouldn't like the idea of her cheating on her family, good for you, it's not happening. Just consider the few chapters that they were around as a one episode crossover.)
(A/N: MC doesn't start off as Ben's childhood friend, he literally comes falling down on him with the Omnitrix and the Nemetrix lol.)
I died, I met an Omnipotent being, and he granted me some wishes. Pretty cliche at this point, right? Can't get any originals in these times, am I right? But that's where the cliches stop. Why? Well, what do you think my wish was? To be overpowered? To have a massive, useless harem? No, god no. I hate harems, damn it! (Ahem ahem, but some worlds are exceptions.) So what was my wish?
Pretty original, I wanted to be a Multiverse myself! Not as in own a Multiverse. But as in be a literal Multiverse myself! Pretty cool, right? But what kind of Multiverse did I become? Simple, I became a Parasitic Multiverse, where I would send pieces of myself to different Multiverses and copy their sources of powers and such to make myself even stronger than them!
Comics like Marvel, DC, Invincible, movies like Transformers, Godzilla, Harry Potter, cartoons like Rick and Morty, TMNT, Kung Fu Panda, animes like Dragon Ball, Bleach, Naruto, and games like God of War, Assassin's Creed, Devil May Cry! I want them all, I want every power available in each and every one of them! So I sent my soul pieces to every one of them!
But not as overpowered beings. Nah, that would be boring. I don't want to just copy their powers, I want to experience and venture around too! So what about this soul piece? What's it going to do, and what Multiverse will it go to? Doesn't the damn title make it obvious?!
This is the tale of my soul piece going to the Ben 10 Multiverse as the bearer of Nemetrix! But would a parasite like me be okay with just a few predators?! No, so good thing my somewhat (very) weird watch can scan the DNAs of other aliens and even automatically give me their predators! Oh, did I mention I can go Ultimate from day one?
Get some popcorn, drinks and snacks, cause it's time to hunt!
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The fanfic is interesting and good so far. Of course, it would be nice if other characters besides the main protagonist didn't seem so helpless (I mean Max, Gwen, and Ben). Also, I would like to know if there will be a romance with anyone.
historia boa e desenvolvimento muito bom mas acho que deveria ter lançamentos mais recorrentes acho que também o autor deveria tentar tentar melhor o relacionamento da gwen com o prota , boa sorte autor.
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Haven't read it yet but that synopsis sure was dope! This review is a placeholder and I hope to see 50 chapters soon, so that I can start binge reading this.
Great story so far and based on the author's usual story it will remain great (another cool thing is in the cover there is a hidden axelotol.
Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator by That_One_Dead_Ali is a refreshing and exhilarating take on the beloved Ben 10 franchise. This fanfiction not only captures the essence of the original series but also injects it with a new level of depth and creativity that is both surprising and delightful. The narrative starts with a mysterious and compelling premise: a boy named Alistair crashes to Earth in a space pod, setting off a chain of events that intertwine his fate with that of Ben Tennyson, the series' iconic hero. One of the most striking aspects of Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator is its seamless blend of familiarity and novelty. The author masterfully retains the core elements that fans love about Ben 10, the action, the adventure, and the diverse array of alien transformations, while introducing Alistair, a new character with his own set of intriguing abilities. This new character brings a fresh perspective to the story, adding layers of mystery and excitement that keep readers eagerly turning the pages. Alistair's journey is particularly captivating because it intertwines themes of memory loss, self-discovery, and the quest for identity. As he regains his memories, readers are taken on a thrilling ride that explores his unique powers and the backstory of his Omnitrix-like device. This narrative thread not only enhances the plot but also deepens the emotional resonance of the story. Alistair’s character development is thoughtfully executed, making him a compelling protagonist who complements Ben's character rather than overshadowing him. The dynamic between Ben and Alistair is one of the story's strongest points. Their interactions are filled with camaraderie, tension, and mutual growth. Ben's established heroism and Alistair's mysterious past create an engaging contrast that drives much of the story's drama and action. Fans of the original series will appreciate how the author stays true to Ben's character, while also allowing him to grow and adapt in response to the challenges presented by Alistair's arrival. Moreover, the world-building in Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator is impressive. The author expands on the existing Ben 10 universe, introducing new settings, alien species, and technological advancements that feel both original and true to the franchise. This rich and detailed world-building enhances the immersive quality of the story, making it easy for readers to get lost in the adventures of Ben and Alistair. The descriptions are vivid and imaginative, painting a clear picture of the various locales and scenarios the characters encounter. The action sequences in the story are another highlight. They are well-choreographed and vividly described, providing readers with a sense of urgency and excitement. The author skillfully balances intense battles with quieter, character-driven moments, ensuring that the narrative maintains a steady and engaging pace. Each fight scene is not just a display of power but also a testament to the characters' growth and resilience. The stakes are high, and the consequences of each battle are felt deeply, adding to the overall tension and excitement of the story. In addition to its action and adventure, Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator also delves into deeper themes such as friendship, trust, and the struggle between good and evil. The characters face moral dilemmas and personal challenges that test their beliefs and values. These thematic explorations add depth to the narrative, making it more than just a simple action story. Readers are encouraged to reflect on the characters' decisions and the consequences of their actions, adding a layer of intellectual engagement to the reading experience. The fanfiction's reception has been overwhelmingly positive, with many readers praising its innovative take on the Ben 10 universe and its well-developed characters. Reviews highlight the author's ability to keep the story fresh and exciting, while still honoring the spirit of the original series. Readers have expressed appreciation for the balance between action and character development, as well as the story's ability to surprise and engage them consistently. One area where the story particularly excels is in its ability to evoke nostalgia while offering something new. Long-time fans of Ben 10 will find themselves delighting in familiar elements, such as Ben's classic alien transformations and the presence of beloved characters like Gwen and Max. At the same time, the introduction of Alistair and the novel plot twists provide a fresh and invigorating experience that feels both respectful of the original material and daringly innovative. The author's writing style is another aspect worth mentioning. It is clear, engaging, and well-suited to the fast-paced nature of the story. Dialogue feels natural and true to the characters, and the narrative flows smoothly from one scene to the next. The occasional humor and light-hearted moments are well-placed, providing relief from the tension and adding to the overall enjoyment of the story. However, like any work of fiction, Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator is not without its areas for improvement. Some readers have noted a desire for more frequent updates, expressing concern that the story might be dropped prematurely. Others have mentioned a wish for deeper development of side characters, suggesting that figures like Gwen and Max could play more prominent roles in the unfolding narrative. These points of critique, while valid, are minor compared to the overwhelming strengths of the story. In conclusion, Ben 10: The Ultimate Predator is a standout fanfiction that breathes new life into the Ben 10 franchise. It is a testament to the author's creativity, passion, and deep understanding of what makes the original series so beloved. Through well-crafted characters, imaginative world-building, and a compelling plot, the story offers a thrilling and emotionally resonant experience that is sure to captivate readers. Whether you are a long-time fan of Ben 10 or new to the series, this fanfiction is a must-read that promises adventure, excitement, and a profound appreciation for the power of storytelling.
GOOD ONE JUST NEED TO UPDATE MORE ASIDE FROM THAT I THINK IT IS ONE OF THE BEST BEN 10 FANFIC OUT HERE SINCE MOST OF THEM JUST STRAIGHT OUT MAKE NO SENSE OR THE GUY PULLS IN GIRLS LIKE IT IS A PEBBLE OR SOMETHING AND MANY OF THEM EVEN DON'T FOLLOW THE ORIGINAL SO I CAN SAY THAT AT LEAST THIS ONE IS GOOD AND IT'S UPTO EVERYONE TASTE SINCE WE WANT TO SEE A GOOD BEN 10 FANFIC
It's a great fanfic with a really cool idea🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Congratulations, happy birthday, I hope God gives you many years of life so you can write many wonderful stories for us and also five stars for this Fanfic, it deserves a lot
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The author san has the same viewpoint on god's as me and I like it also nice story pls don't drop it,..,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,..................,.................
Good to see you well Ail I have great expectations of the story I just don't want to know is this harem?
Same here, don't you dare drop this story , and whenever the MC get a new female character give a image please . Lastly don't drop it , it got my attention , and everyone will support you with power stone , keep getting this story updated. And I will share this story
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I don't wanna say some words. I'm just, you know, holy moly man, I can't bear it, that's amazing!!! That Ben 10 fanfic is the best! Also, double bearers of Omnitrix and Nemetrix are kind of cool, you know. It's not so complicated, but it gives a new sense of freshness. Because using Nemetrix is literally new, if we are looking on other fanfics.
this has been a good read the grammar is good, the interactions are awesome and plus points for no harenm The only problem I really had is that there's no challenge we all know that MC is going to win in the end and which is why it bothers me when that becomes too easy since you already know what is going to happen
seems ok but the thing it's going to dropped in 20-30 chapters so meh