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//SHORT HIATUS//
//CHAPTERS WILL CHANGE TIME AFTER TIME//
//I RECOMMEND YOU READING THE NOVEL AFTER 70 CHAPTERS ARE PIBLISHED//


In a world defined by opposing forces—light and dark, kindness and madness—humans are locked in an endless struggle with demons, who always seem to prevail due to their abilities and physical traits. Despite this, humans persist in developing technology to combat the demons, prompting the demons to create entities to counter human strength. The battle between these two factions rages on until humans vanish.

The story delves into the concept that the existence of one thing necessitates the existence of its opposite, as the absence of the primary force allows its counterpart to persist. The only solution to end this conflict is to eliminate the primary force.

“Evil does not exist, sir, or at least it does not exist unto itself. Evil is simply the absence of God. It is just like darkness and cold, a word that man has created to describe the absence of God. God did not create evil. Evil is not like faith or love, that exist just as does light and heat. Evil is the result of what happens when man does not have God's love present in his heart. It's like the cold that comes when there is no heat or the darkness that comes when there is no light.”
-Albert Einstein

WEEKLY CHAPTERS: 3-5/WEEK (IT MAY MATTER BECAUSE OF MY HEALTH)
CHAPTER LENGTH: 1800-2500 WORDS

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Mask_Xd

The author creates a fascinating villain, and the addition of Luca's character adds an interesting twist. The story has the potential for an engaging redemption journey, making it promising and enjoyable.

10mth
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Scorpious_star

I really enjoyed the ride to the fantasy world that this novel took me on! It is a wonderful book and I could clearly see the hard work the author has put into the storyline. Everything is written in a manner that is not confusing at all and makes it a great time for reading. Well done author, you are doing amazing! <3

1yr
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ThePhoenixGod

This book is very nice, one of the best I've seen in a while. I highly recommend it. I'm awaiting more chapters, author! Keep up the good work and don't loose consistency.

9mth
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anime_otaku_6087

This novel is just amazing and it also has a very good start. I personally love Luca's character. I hope it continues like this.

9mth
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Scarlet_Wolf96

Interesting story. The plot is interesting. The storyline is enough to make me curious. However, I think it's only chapter 6 that I think is quite mindblowing.As long as it can create an unexpected scene and make the reader curious, I think that's enough.good job, author!!

9mth
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cosmicslime

Reviewing at chapter 34: The atmosphere of this story is captured pretty well, the details about the souls screaming in agony and the hollow darkness that surrounded them was something that was actually engaging. The main issue I have is remembering who's who here....like the names Titan 5, Titan 6 and Titan 7 don't exactly stand out.

10mth
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zingertje_123

Wow. I would have never come up with this. You have a great fantasy and if I see great work I tell this to the person. I have seen much but this is so great that I don't have the words for it. Keep the good work up.

10mth
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Ninestar619_5803

from the start of the book, you get hooked at the pages, dragging you for more and more. The author has a lot of talent that can be seen in his words. The writing style and back ground setting plus the character designing all are written like professionals. No clue how he does that but this a rare talents of writing. GREAT WORK AUTHOR. Keep it up!

10mth
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Jonas321

I love all the villain characters in the story! I believe our tastes align in this regard. Therefore, it's practically impossible for me to give a low rating to the story. May the evil protagonists continue to reign forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😈👑

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10mth
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ToufiqUlAlam

The book has great potential. The story builds a world and then connects two characters from two completely different spectrums of society. This is the classic collision of social status. I loved the story..I hope the author keeps writing till the end...I will cheer you on! It is a good read, indeed.

1yr
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Moawar

Now THIS is a story written by someone who knows what they are doing, the only gripe I have is that it's kind of awkward to read on my phone, but the rest is showing promise !

1yr
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xish101

I don't care about what others will say, but this story has great potential to be out there, the way you expressed things felt like you experienced all this yourself, and the philosophy parts are so agreeable. Keep up this amazing work.All the best...

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1yr
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Zenithnovels

Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!

11mth
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Dungeon_Warrior

Great story. i really enjoyed it, kudos to the author

1yr
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Rarajasmin_jazz

It's an amazing story! I've only read five chapters, but it's already captivating. I plan to keep reading. I've noticed that the paragraphs are quite lengthy. It's just a suggestion, but breaking them into smaller paragraphs could enhance the reading experience for others.

1yr
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UelUel

Great story. The narration is quite solid but it will improve more by fixing those long paragraphs that have both dialogue and narration in them. The plotline is very interesting. It's not that unique or something new but the way the story was written really catches the attention of the readers especially the first chapter. I hope it gets more views from the readers.

1yr
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Xcalibur_Xc

Good story so far. It would be better to split those big paragraphs into smaller parts for more immersive reading. As you know reading on app, it gets a bit distracting. Other than that, a really nice plot. Would like to see which direction you take this story to. Keep up the good work.

1yr
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Pixxie_Mysteria999

It was a great story for me to read so far and I appreciate the time and effort this author put into. It was a real pleasure reading it. It would be even great if this person fixes the grammar issues and make shorter paragraphs. Other than that, great job, Author.

1yr
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Tác giả FriedrichFriedrice