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What if someone from the Gaang had betrayed their friend? What if they were never a kind and caring person? What if the betrayed friend managed to go back in time?
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Joanjudo Đóng góp 48 -
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Not as good as I thought.. first book was honestly better.. although, author mess up with the bending but besides that, the old book was perfect imo.. people aren’t really great at writing story’s of a character going back in time.. the character isn’t there and the plot is rigid and awkward.. not authors fault, it’s just very hard for newbie authors to get the essense of a character and duplicating it accurately.. It’s not fun reading a story a plot character.. I’d rather an oc who reincarnated as zuko instead of just being zuko and going back in time.. this is were everything goes wrong cuz we subconsciously compare characters..
Hey guys, shameless author here to give himself a good review. This a different version of ATLA as my previous one ended as a failure. Hope you enjoy...