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ATLA - The One Ring
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Hello, friends
So this is a bit of fun for me. Basically, you, the people, will control the actions of a fresh SI into the ATLA universe. Now given the title, most might expect a Green Lantern or something.
I'll pop that bubble now. You are the Ring, a simple gold ring. ROB is a nice guy like that, dropping you in the Si Wong Dessert (where Appa got stolen) even more so.
In the beginning, you have only two powers.
Call and Contact. You will draw nearby people to be your host and you can talk to them after they pick up the ring.
Over time as your host does things or acts certain ways or might even have pre-built powers, you can gain something similar.
If you get put up with a thief? You'll learn to dampen noise, be more hidden and if you bond deeply, complete actions or fights or "quests" you can learn to go chameleon and more. These traits you gain, you could pass on to your next host.
If you get a Fire bending host and stay with them a while, you can eventually gain the ability to grant fire bending to your hosts.
Yes, at some point your hosts will be like the Avatar, If not stronger.
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The ROB did say one thing before it all faded to white and pain.
"Become interesting. Make the King worry, make the Spirits frown, make the Sage pace, the Old Man sweat, and above all...tell them nothing.
"Your knowledge is your only trick for now. If you turn their gazes to me, I will unplug their world, you along with it. Have fun now!" he...she? They said with a smile.
Pain hurts and being torn away from everything sucks.
But you were a magical ring now, so it could only go up from here.
You are The One Ring.
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(This is something for me to do while I relax and plan for Depthless Hunger. I took the idea from the DC-The One Ring, written by Stewart92. Go check it out)
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We gonna make our host so OP that not even the whole world of Avatar is Gonna stop us 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 this is So Gonna be Peak
This is just pure fun. Not much else that can be said about it. The concept is uniqe and well executed. I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.
Will your story continue until the end of ATLA and end in this series or will it continue until the Legend of Korra series? I really hope it reaches the Legend of Korra since I really wanted Korra to get the MC as a child and grow with him so he could influence her to reach her maximum potential, because from what was shown Korra was the avatar with the greatest potential ever that she bends 3 of the 4 elements naturally while most avatars couldn't figure out that they were avatars until they were 12 when they did that test with the toys and she only couldn't airbend before because she was first physically trapped in the white lotus complex and mentally trapped in the role of avatar, both things that were the fault of white lotus, which is why she was only able to airbend after leaving the complex and losing her other folds since after losing the other 3 folds she thought she had stopped being the avatar, thus freeing herself from her physical and mental prisons, I would really like to see the MC making her become an unstoppable force reaching her full potential with his influence
Vamos fazer com que nossos anfitriões se sintam pessoas honradas por deus!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Vamo pra cima time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For now all 5 there since I can's judge anything wrong yet(chapter 7) Concept is great I love it. Only negative that I have is that it is in second POV which throws away my immersion a bit, but I can understand why. and I got more used to it now (in the DC the ring story I couldn't really get used to it so I think you did it better than there). Also a tip for in the future I would recomment putting somewhere how long people have to make a choice (just an average is already good). So that they can't complain later when the choises are almost even and then they voted and it changed the result while you already made the next chapter
I love this concept, I hope you will too. .......................................................................................................................................