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4.38 (22 số lượng người đọc)

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Bella Swan had arrived in Forks, Washington to live with her father, a town filled with supernatural,

but what if, she had already met a supernatural creature before arriving at forks,

what if she had met an ancient vampire from a different world altogether,

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hotrod85

Out of all the vampire twilight crossovers I’ve read this is by far my favorite the way crosses them over is brilliant I hope he updates this story and keeps it going

5yr
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preciousprqt4u

The english isnt very well but the book has a great story line. I only wish it was updated alot sooner. Seems like the author just disappeared right when it started getting good

5yr
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Lize
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Its intersting story.. While i dont really like twillight.. But idk why there are a lot of twillight ff lately.. I decided to try one.. And i found this story quite intersting.. 😂🤣😂🤣

5yr
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CelestialDaoDeity

It's an okay book I guess. Will definitely come running whenever it updates. Of course in there lies the problem: the author needs an update schedule.

5yr
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50ShadesOfAss

Mc isn’t even paired with Bella how boring 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴 sister and brother , can already tell this godlike entity vampire literally got “attached” to Bella for the plot. You want me to believe that would really happen . I can already imagine when mc when try to kill someone , it would be the typical anime cliche of being whipped to the girl he’s attached to 😴😴😴 how boring

5yr
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CelestialBirdthing

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5yr
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Big_brother_coming

More More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

5yr
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Isaiah_1217

Quite intriguing and interesting character the MC is especially with how he was created and his purpose not just that but way how he destroyed different pantheon/primordial gods and other species had them afraid of him and everything before left to different world like the idea of there being more kinds of supernatural then the shifters and the weaker vampires do look forward to reading more of this book definitely quite intrigued by it and way how u have set this book up so far cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book

2yr
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Sitouo

not the best i read so far but still amazing, just disappointed that you would drop this treasure! FILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLERFILLER

4yr
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annblevins2012

I thought this was a good book. i think you should finished writong the book. I love the characters you put init. crosspver was a good choice

4yr
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Mikazuki1869

Recommend this story! Nice to have a slightly op character in Twilight, may seem cliche for some but it's a different take to the usual Twilight fanfic. ✧٩(の❛ᴗ❛ の)۶

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4yr
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SINU
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Already drop Or there will be any update in the future

4yr
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VastoHeaven

An interesting novel indeed. Not perfect but still interesting. ✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍✌👍

4yr
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Skyrim_bk

I put my 2 power stones in this fan-fic to encourage you to continue please. go go go go go go go go go go go go go go go continue pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese

5yr
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AbsoluteCarnage

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5yr
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zee30
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The addition of characters from other worlds make sense but the characters themselves seem rushed, or one-dimensional. Points for creativity with the story though

5yr
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Rukimedsu

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5yr
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Will_Caruso

great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!great idea!!!

5yr
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KingCobra

Awesome story i really liked the storyline //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////_////////////////////__________

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