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An OP Character in Naruto
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This is my first Fanfic and I'm not sure how it turned out but as the name suggests the MC will be OP from the start. Note: there's no harems I'm strongly against writing harem tropes but there will be romance. .[Note: this will be fast paced]
minimum of one chapter per week
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Dang dude what happed how could you botch up the story like that it’s like you didn’t even tried as if you sat down a bunch of monkeys and had them type this
Just an honest evaluation. not really worth the time with the character design and story development.
Author forgot the Villain tag, so this story won't be for you, if you dislike evil Mc's.
This is my first time giving a story lowest rating bro was on drugs while writing this fic like seriously potraying mc using chakra with dragon ball characters and looting sharingan when he have All pure blooded saiyans battle knowledge, techniques, potential along with freeza , buu, piccolo and jiren. In my personal opinion if he had powers from Narutoverse this should be good story but having dragon ball powers and acting like a kid totally waste in my opinion.
the writing is pretty good but the main character is trash. Hes so boring and acts like a child while critiquing everyone else about how they are stupid or too childish. Honestly the mc is pathetic and Unlikable. The story is also boring along with the mc. Mc is just in school acting like the kid he is while he’s a reincarnated person