Alchemist Knight: Under a Shadow of Moonlight

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Elenayveet

This would be the best potential book I have read. Written in an easy to read, engaging style. The story flows well, and the descriptions are vivid enough to paint a clear picture without being too wordy. There are a few spots where the grammar and phrasing could use a little polish, but overall, it's a smooth read that keeps you turning the pages.

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readerpov

The overall story is fantastic, and I'm really loving the direction it's heading! Keep up the great work!

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Kiyoki_02

I read chapter 1. It caught my attention since some emotional cues can lead to misunderstanding and potentially ruin friendship. I'll read the rest of the chapter later. But it's a wholesome story. A masterpiece.

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AeonAeon

Author can you please tell if it is harem or single fl...hope it's single fl

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RI_Lore

this has to be one of the most engaging novels I have read until know i am at 5 chapter although it is still progressing but still the way it's written is truly admirable.

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Empressofwords

Very great story 💯 Never been feeling so close to home when reading a story, please keep writing and finish the story. Love it so much, thumb up 👍

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deadmandreaming

It's a slow burn on an interesting premise, the language needs some of work in grammar and syntax - there's confusing transitions between 1st and 3rd pov - but the characters have charm and the plot has a nice flow, quite anime-like.

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Dreadfull_Dusk

Great story, it moves at a slow pace, but it kind of make sense. I love the way you portray your characters, and the plot is very intriguing! Wonderful web novel!

LV 1

ArtbusterBeeze

This is a Good story for what I have read. The story does move along at a slow pace which is not necessarily bad. The characters were introduced in a way that you would be able to get a picture of who they were and they had some good dynamics. This is the strong point. But I do need to address some of the Grammar as there is some I have to note. First of all, when you are writing for the dialogue you should stick to a tense for the characters. It can get confusing if you say ' Here is what happened, I went to the front and then I would slap them'(Just an example). It does not sound right so I do believe that this is an area which needs improvement as it can be seen many times. There are others that could be stylized better to incorporate a better Dialogue narrative as with some improvements, the dialogue could be amazing. Overall though, the Story dominates as it holds up the interest in the chapters and if you are willing to look past the mistakes you still have a story which can draw you in with well -rounded characters and nice world.

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Dragon_Heart9

It's a interesting novel to me! But I still don't know where they are right now, I hope it is revealed as I am reading more chapter. Great work, author

LV 4

Nixel_Lazuli

I like the world background and the character design . Although the pacing and switch between first person and third person was not pleasant and slightly confusing. The adventure part dud peak my interest

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Morbius_King

Interesting. Slow slow-paced, but great plot. I like the story development, most especially the character-building. I can't wait to find out what lies ahead 🤗

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GMSJakers

Slow pace, but absolutely great pickup. The excitement in this story is reallly enjoyable and keeps you at the edge of your seat.

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Ms_Smiling

The story is kinda slow at first but then it takes a great turn. I love the characters they are very realistic. Highly recommended for its adventurous troupe !

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ImmortalClown

Well, this is the first time I'm writing a review but I will say my honest opinion. I like the story so far. I like there was a slow pace before the main action. it gives the story a more realistic flow. The characters are also likeable and they have their own personalities as well, making them feel like real characters. I will just leave this five star review and come back when there are more chapters

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AthensAwaitsMe

I enjoyed this story very much. It was a bit slow in the beginning, but it got a lot better as I progressed. The characters were very realistic. The quality of writing was also very good. I think I liked the overall idea of the story, but the author really brought it to life!

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Perishable_Heaven

Interesting story, after reading half-way through 1st chapter i got hooked on how the story was going to progress; while, yes there isn't anything much of interest happening in the first chapter what caught my eye was the writing quality, story pacing, and the emphasis on the characters involved. This wasn't a rush job and there was care actually put into the writing process elevating it's quality. I've just arrived at the 6th chapter but i can say that this is something i plan to keep reading. Keep going author your doing a great job!

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Akhdan_Fadhil

saat saya membacanya saya merasa masuk didalam ceritanya, ini novel yg saya rekomendasikan untuk penggemar fantasy, dari ceritanya, cara menulisnya, dan hal hal lainnya cukup untuk pembaca novel, hormat untuk penulis

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Rishabh_sharma_RIS

while reading it I am feeling like I am in that universe nice way of writing presenting and point of view you have a nice work done that's all I have to say all to 5