Tóm tắt
"I was never afraid of death then and I won't start now, when were both in hell I'll kill you again" Joey said with bloodshot eyes
and blood running down his weapon.
Joey Wells is a 15-year-old butcher who was forced to take the sky warrior tournament after his uncle left him with nothing but a
book from his father, he has been unknowingly training under his Uncle for years and was finally old enough to take part in hopes of
a better life as sky warrior, little does Joey know that the Sky warrior tournament is just the beginning of a journey
of what was supposed to be his fast way to success but instead a cruel a predetermined fate that was decided before he was born.
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This piece of work is amazing! Nice story, great concept, and good potential! Though, a few grammar mistakes here and there. But, it didn't disturb the understanding of the story. Would love to see how the story develops. After reading a few of the released chapters, it has already hooked me up. Can't wait for more update. Thank you, author, for producing good work for us to read! [img=recommend]
The Celestials send their regards! The story has depth from page one. Even though there is a lot that it was not explained regarding the whole nine sky, but that is how to slowly build up a good solid foundation for the story. Keep up the good job.
I think this is worth reading as it has a rich plot and broad story but what caught my attention is truly the book cover. If this is an original artwork, you did an amazing job.
This is a very interesting read... creative plot and has potential. Just some minor errors but overall action packed with interesting characters...
Amazing world building and super interesting story I'm so excited to read more! I really enjoyed it, and it will be so great to watch Author grow and improve even more :)
Author is still learning. Like a growing plant, one day he'll blossom into a great tree. Hopefully we'll soon see the fruits (novels). As for the novel, its going well.
Although Author has few shortcomings, the story is still enjoyable to read, especially with the word choice and how the characters interact with each other.
Since I skimmed it through, I've only understand a bit of it, but so far, the story is great. Also, not only was he good at describing etc, I also loved his writing skills! I'll be expecting great more things to come from ya!! Good luck!!
After giving this a good scim read I've come up with a couple of pros. First of all, I like the world-building, although its cliche with the sky warrior thing, it's interesting since uncles are notoriously known to be pedophiles in the books. I enjoyed seeing how this will go, how far the author can take his/her imagination. Good book. Also better start updating more dude, u got me hooked, now you owe me 100 more chapters, get writting
There's little to say yet, but I love what I read! The premise is fresh and original, and I'd love to read more soon! I can't way to see how the plot is going to develop.
Soooooooo Author-kun threatened me, but.......dammit I liked it and the start was really good I think this will be a smash don't **** up kid.
i love the idea of the sky and the plot is promising 👌 i need to be blunt though that as a novel written in english, the author needs to polish a bit on grammar, punctuations and how ideas are to be connected smoothly so that the readers will be able to understand with much ease the original and wonderful plot and what is actually happening. if you are someone super imaginative then this novel is for you👌💖 i look forward to more updates to see how both the story and author will progress.. i hope the author can push through spirity💖
The story has a good beginning. The premise of being a butcher and traveling through a sci-fi environment is new and makes me want to read more. Best of luck with your story! I look forward to more chapters.
I only have one word for this novel, one word only. Are you curious about my one word too? Why so curious? Stop reading to find out my one word man. Omg, please stop being so curious. Curiosity will kill the cat, don't you know this. Fine, seeing how you're so desperate to know my one word. It's collection. What's collection? Obviously, it's adding this novel to your library fool.
Good writing quality and consistent update stability should be a must in every novel. But with this world background, it gives better color paired with unique characters and timely paced story development. Nice job.
.................................................. Writing Quality is excellent. I love the story Development and also the Character designs were awesome!! The storyline is so unique . I really love it. I hope for more from the author. keep it up author.
Shameless Author, Disciple greets readers I hope you all can really use your imagination to paint your own word because I think someone would call a planet being this close to the earth illogical, but when that time come's I don't wanna describe every detail and make it boring. I can mayyyyybe, promise chapters until June but imma be gone probablyy for june and half of July for exams and my grammar isn't perfect because I speak mostly creole, but English isn't hard for me so I promise better grammar.