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Rain poured down, mingling with the blood that soaked the ground. Death and loss surrounded a girl clutching a long katana. Her black hair framed two long red horns protruding from her head—she was an Oni, a rare evolution of the ogre species.
She stared at the monster that had destroyed everything—her friends, her family, her home. It resembled a dragon but was something else entirely, its form shifting between liquid and solid blackness.
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The book is good, I like where this story is going. However I have one minor problem. The dialogue is abit stiff and way too formal between characters. That’s the only problem I have with it’s if you could change that then the story would be getting 5 stars through and through. Overall 4/5.
Overall, the stories, great the characters are well written. There are some grammar mistakes, but that can be ignored the stories also well phrased
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here's my honest review the story is good but there were typing errors that i saw
I will add it to my collection for now and see if you will continue or drop it if you do continue I will read it after it has 20+ chapters. I hope you don't drop it and good luck