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Abyss Watcher in the league V2

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An undead warrior is taken from his world with a mysterious heritage, look as he travels this new world and meet new people, and will he manage to get over his dreadful past? Find out.
(this is a rewrite of my original Story, Abyss watcher in the league, it will have a few more plot twists and will also be longer hopefully).

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TheMothMan

Hmmm abyss watcher eh Where dead men lies I'm paralyzed My brothers' eyes are gone And he shall be buried here Nameless marks his grave Mother home, get a telegram And shed a tear of grief Mud and blood, in foreign land Trying to understand Where is this greatness I've been told? This is the lies that we've been sold Is this a worthy sacrifice? Great War And I cannot take more Great tour I keep on marching on I play the great score There will be no encore Great War The war to end all wars I'm standing here, I'm full of fear With bodies at my feet Over there, in the other trench Bullets wear my name Lead ahead, as the captain said And show them no remorse Who am I to understand What have I become? I do my duties, pay the price I'll do the worthy sacrifice I know my deeds are not in vain Great War And I cannot take more Great tour I keep on marching on I play the great score There will be no encore Great War The war to end all wars And feet by feet We pay the price of a mile, here Though men are falling We see heroes rise We face the heat As we are fighting until the dawn So follow me, and we will write our own history Great War And I cannot take more Great tour I keep on marching on I play the great score There will be no encore Great War The war to end all wars

5yr
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gundamNora

if you are fan of dark souls series and league of legend give this a shot. The author certainly does their lore research. The story has a good flow, plot, interesting character involvement, and its an interesting crossover.

5yr
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XanaShadow

Hello, author here. First, I would like to point out that the beginning might not be very promising, but please bare a few chapters, 4 at most. Also, remember to give me your thoughts on my story, no matter what they are.

5yr
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Kray8
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Great story .I hope you dont drop IT. Hgddhgshhffbhfcbgdffhhdjjjjsjsjsjdjjdhgshhshdhhdjdjdjskksosksksjdjdjdjdjjdjsjsjsjjsjsjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjkdjdjdjdjjdjsiksoslsppspspspapslkdkdkdkdkdkkdkdk

5yr
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Sol_Sanguis

It actually becomes really good later on but compared to “Two Lost Souls” (a redo kinda of this book from the same author) the start could be way better.

4yr
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Henrique_Paiao

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4yr
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BankroMist

The author certainly does their lore research. The story has a good flow, plot, interesting character involvement, and its an interesting crossover.

5yr
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Just_a_Dark_Soul

While the story and background are very good, the updates are very distant from each other, honestly i liked very much about this fan fiction, mainly because it mixes two of my favorite games, but even then, the update schedule in this moment is very bad, at the start the schedule was acceptable, once or twice a week, but now in not like this, the chapters noe are rare to come, so i recomend to read but i don't think you'll have the paitience to wait for the chapters.

5yr
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Grimmypoo

(Disclaimer: Not the best at reviewing things in depth like some other people.) I enjoyed binge reading this. There are a few problems with capitalization and stuff but they aren't too noticeable and don't impact the reading experience. It was also nice to see a face put on the abyss watchers (can't remember if artorias was considered one. I should probably catch up on dks3 lore and brush up one dks1 lore as well.). I don't really play lol or know much about it but it was still an enjoyable read for me. Just had to look a few things up. I think that's all I wanted to say; I lost my train of thought so I can't remember. Anyways, it's a nice read. Keep up the nice work brudda.

5yr
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Fate_Averruncus

Hey Author, I came here to try this after reading one of your DxD crossover which I liked very much. Honestly I don't even know the story which you did the DxD crossover with but it was very entertaining for even someone like me who read a fanfic without knowing the actual story. hope this story will continue to entertain me as well. (don't mind the rating I didn't read it but you need to rate it to add a comment.)

2yr
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Cabelinho

I loved the story and the plot is very good, I liked the personality of the protagonist and the two characters, I loved the interaction between them, and the romance is amazing, I highly recommend it

2yr
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Ben_Ramsay

no new chapter sad. great story though. ....................................................................\[T]/...........................

3yr
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BookWizard23412

Brother. This is very cool go on

3yr
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Aifread6969

You thought it was a REVIEW But it was me EXP!

3yr
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TheMostAbstract

Institue of war verse is trash, it just turns runterra into less of a true world IMHO. Decent story otherwise. Also, the dialog could use a lot of work, seems dry and unrealistic.

3yr
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Jack7032

other than the fact everyone thought that this fanfic was dropped this is one of my favorites on this app it's a good story overall and I can't wait to read more

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3yr
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Excavelier

i have already read this on a different website and so i already know what is the story so give it a try.```````````````````````````````````

3yr
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Voidless001

i love your book it is awesome and i wish you would continue it iv just read through it all and now im pretty sad that it looks your going to abandon it as this is by far one of the beat fanfics iv ever read

3yr
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FatAlmighty

I am mostly just sticking around for the romance, will it become a harem with nadalee and ahri,I want to know this before I go in too deep and get disappointed if it's harem,hoping that it's just a romance with ahri tho, I really liked it till nadalee was added I guess.really hoping that it's not harem as I enjoyed the story till ch 27.

3yr
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YourRaven

Its really good and i like the development between the MC and other character also the Interaction between him and everybody else in the Rift . i wish there were more League of Legends fanfics in this site

4yr
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