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After waking up in my family's prepper bunker it literally took me less than five minutes to almost die after exiting it to see why I woke up there and be attacked by a rabid machine screaming about building a "Meat Bicycle" out of my body parts...
Now after leaning where I am after seeing a small village out closer to the city I lived nearby, I have to ask the most important question a man can in my situation. "Does one fist the android?"
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the reality about this fic and other works by the author. your stories are good, but if you expect you to start reading and one day you will finish one of your stories forget it, unless you commission all the chapters. author has more than 10 stories in progress and none have concluded, all are on hiatus no commission no stories, I even think it's right for him to charge for his works but at least the author should write original works not fanfic, in the end he charges commission from his character in the stories of others, and not the story itself.
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The story is good, just hope at least you are going to finish a Nier Story. Almost every one is cursed to never be finished. . ...,.. ..........
the whole story is shet. mc is a degenerate, issei like pervert, that uses the androids programming juat to have sx with them. Useless, idiotuc, disgusting. + its harem, so i was never going to givw it a better than 1 star review.
Keep going your doing a great job. Also will he live longer since he has an acellerated healing factor. Like wolverine and dead pool. And like the omakes will he go to different worlds to get more powerful or just terror form the one he's in now. It would be cool if he got the advanced technology of other worlds and brought it to his own like krytonians cloning methods or rick and mortys inventions just popping up randomly.
very good and enjoyable fic, I like it and want more of it. ..........................................................................................
Well ima keep this review short….. I have an unhealthy level of obsession with this book…. I’ve reread it at least 4 times robo waifus for the win
This Is awesome😀😀😀i hope you keep it up with the other story because nier automata fanfics are nearly zero😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
Author has lost his way Well this one is a bit difficult to write as I had good time with this novel, however it’s time to address the elephant of the room. While the author’s approach to make fantasy words into more realistic is pretty neat thing same cannot be said about his characters… While it is fairly explaining why androids act such excentric way towards the protagonist the same cannot be said about the later cast,- who were written in a way to lack personal interests and goals solely/mostly focusing on main character whith all essential parts of the relationships and character growth happening off-screen. Alot of good ideas but extreme mediocre execution - I think the perfect summary would be a cartoon box with a caption „here be dragons” which tries to predict that it will get good one day, but in the end is still just a cartoon cube. Most visible issue during later chapters is the pacing or lack of it. Main Protagonist can be presented with a problem with no good solution just to suddenly solve it off-screen or in a span of 2 pages without any sort test of wits and more like angry player complaining to developer to nerf the debuff. As I mentioned before most relationships are extremely fast paced well past the point of them feeling unnatural especially during the multiverse arc which requires it own separate section, believe that! Another big problem is the multiverse arc… yeah… that was bad. The multiverse addition clearly shows that author ran out of the ideas on how to solve the current MC issues so instead he added RWBY into the mix do that he can add more „waifus”. The way it’s implemented lacks any sort of subtlely making novel lose it charms as it becomes yet another multiverse kingdom building webfic. Another thing is author critical errors in using characters introduced with multiverse, who often come as one dimensional, barely having any sort of opinion besides 2-4 selected topics and whatever MC thinks(although it might be an effect of my personal spite for whatever author did to Weiss character) I probably didn’t say anything other than what other readers already said, good idea but terrible execution.
the writer is a professional, he/she know how to write, But if you expect it to be Nier only, better stay away, i am fine with a perverted mc, but honestly i think mc is too much perverted,he literally only see android as a play thing rather than a life partner to me. At least thats what it seems to me
Fantastic story ........................................................................................ ......................................
So first thing's first. NieR fanfiction?! Wow, colour me surprised. I'm rating this 5* to purely gain some attraction so that people can actually try out the game and this story. Now I'll give an actual review when I'm done catching up.
It was awesome, it was beautiful, it was perfectly balanced,really the only grip I have is the shitty update schedule, but nonetheless I eagerly await more stories of this legend
I honestly wish he author would consider just continuing the stories without bothering with the commissions but otherwise, it’s really good and The other stories are good to.
5 stars since its the only nier fanfic which is active around ........................................................................
This. Is god teir. More of this please, I love this, I crave everything that is in this fic. I just can’t get enough of this, the way the mc is like a deity to all the androids*chef kiss* beautiful!
Your stories tend to really suffer with pacing and even power scaling issues. You tend to rush events like you really want the story to end with some events feeling that they really have no place being there especially with this whole Multiverse thing is added. Explanation and even its existence isn't really introduced unless suddenly its time for it to happen. The story also lacks consequences for certain actions, this happens, that happens and that is it. It's the same issue that your original Danmachi story had. And that ending, man things are just so rushed and completely unacomplished. You have some amazing ideas but execution really leaves much to be desired.
An excellent story for me and in my personal opinion, thank you very much for the Great Story, eagerly awaiting more ART and many more Chapters
Started reading this out of sheer boredom and was immediately hooked. Well-written, engaging, all of that. When the idea of multiverse/world travelling came up I was initially disappointed. I usually hate that kind of thing, it's often just a bad way of trying to keep a bland story interesting. Anyway, super glad I kept reading. Actual depth to the characters, interesting and enjoyable MC. Can't believe I'm actually saying this, but world-travelling done right! Reasons why it's necessary, meeting new characters without discarding old ones, it even fits with the plot! I'm astounded and impressed. Loving this story
Honestly I was enjoying this quite a lot until the remnant arc. The mc says just how much the androids mean to him, yet as soon as he’s in remnant he sleeps with the militia twins…. Which okay I can bypass that. But it started going downhill after he got together with Weiss. It felt way too rushed without reason and it also took away from his interactions with the androids… which should have been the main focus of this fic. It’s not bad however I stopped enjoying this as much during the remnant arc, it feels like he’s always accommodating to Weiss and reading their interactions is honestly a chore. It doesn’t have the same flow as when he talks with the androids.
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Love it GIve me more......................... On that note its already quite rare to find recent Nier Fanfics across the internet let alon in webnovel so the moment i saw this i clicked on it. and so far i wasnt dissapointed. not much to critique on aside from more chapters!!!!. but by far one of the best Nier Fanfics on this site. Keep Up the Good Work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!