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very good better than what I was expecting but I have a question does the mc get a semblance?
Two Words.... Mega Peak The characters, Rinko himself, the world-building, the factions, the plotwist, even the essence of Vols 1-4 are there... 𝐏𝐄𝐀𝐊 writing, my man. I KNEEEEL
Actually impressive fanfic, I highly recommend this for anyone that wants to see a Mac that’s not op but still capable and dependable. However the highlight of this book is the humanity and great depiction of actual human interaction, 5/5 on writing your characters author and goodluck for this story
I Love how everything feels natural especially in their conversation. Not like the usual anime girls that always blush, like damn, it's honestly refreshing to read this. I Loved the part where Ozpin and Kakashi talked about their past life, it feels Natural, ya know? This is a great fanfic, I can't wait to see more of it!
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First of all, the story's great! The first arc held such emotional impact as well as the second arc's finally. And I like the vision you're going with this, please keep it up!
Hello, Author here, I think you should read this before diving into the first chapter since I received plenty of comments about... something. I want to address something that might cross your mind as you read. This story is a deliberate exploration of what happens when Kakashi Hatake, a seasoned ninja and former Hokage, is placed in an entirely different world with none of his usual powers, authority, or status. In this take, Kakashi has been reincarnated into the body of Rinko Schnee—a character with a flawed past, strained relationships, and a legacy shaped by his father, Jacques Schnee. This means Kakashi isn’t stepping into this world as the strong, confident leader you might expect, but as someone who has to navigate an entirely new life full of emotional and social challenges. The core of this story isn’t about Kakashi’s physical abilities or tactical prowess (though those aspects of his personality will shine through in time); it’s about how he, with all his experience and wisdom, adapts to being in a world where his past life doesn’t define him, and where he has to rebuild trust, relationships, and even his sense of self. If this feels like a departure from the Kakashi you’re used to, that’s intentional. The story is as much about Rinko Schnee as it is about Kakashi Hatake—two identities overlapping and evolving into something new. I hope you’ll stick around to see how it unfolds, and I’m open to feedback along the way! Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy this journey. (I put 5/5 on my story because I genuinely think it's a great story, If you think otherwise, it is fine. I'm not suggesting it's perfect. I aim to humanize my characters and give them more depth. I won't dislike you nor stop you from not liking the story because everyone has different tastes. who knows? Maybe when you read this, you'll grow to like it.)
very good better than what I was expecting but I have a question does the mc get a semblance?
Two Words.... Mega Peak The characters, Rinko himself, the world-building, the factions, the plotwist, even the essence of Vols 1-4 are there... 𝐏𝐄𝐀𝐊 writing, my man. I KNEEEEL
Actually impressive fanfic, I highly recommend this for anyone that wants to see a Mac that’s not op but still capable and dependable. However the highlight of this book is the humanity and great depiction of actual human interaction, 5/5 on writing your characters author and goodluck for this story
I Love how everything feels natural especially in their conversation. Not like the usual anime girls that always blush, like damn, it's honestly refreshing to read this. I Loved the part where Ozpin and Kakashi talked about their past life, it feels Natural, ya know? This is a great fanfic, I can't wait to see more of it!
Tiết lộ Spoiler First of all, the story's great! The first arc held such emotional impact as well as the second arc's finally. And I like the vision you're going with this, please keep it up!
Hello, Author here, I think you should read this before diving into the first chapter since I received plenty of comments about... something. I want to address something that might cross your mind as you read. This story is a deliberate exploration of what happens when Kakashi Hatake, a seasoned ninja and former Hokage, is placed in an entirely different world with none of his usual powers, authority, or status. In this take, Kakashi has been reincarnated into the body of Rinko Schnee—a character with a flawed past, strained relationships, and a legacy shaped by his father, Jacques Schnee. This means Kakashi isn’t stepping into this world as the strong, confident leader you might expect, but as someone who has to navigate an entirely new life full of emotional and social challenges. The core of this story isn’t about Kakashi’s physical abilities or tactical prowess (though those aspects of his personality will shine through in time); it’s about how he, with all his experience and wisdom, adapts to being in a world where his past life doesn’t define him, and where he has to rebuild trust, relationships, and even his sense of self. If this feels like a departure from the Kakashi you’re used to, that’s intentional. The story is as much about Rinko Schnee as it is about Kakashi Hatake—two identities overlapping and evolving into something new. I hope you’ll stick around to see how it unfolds, and I’m open to feedback along the way! Thank you for reading, and I hope you enjoy this journey. (I put 5/5 on my story because I genuinely think it's a great story, If you think otherwise, it is fine. I'm not suggesting it's perfect. I aim to humanize my characters and give them more depth. I won't dislike you nor stop you from not liking the story because everyone has different tastes. who knows? Maybe when you read this, you'll grow to like it.)