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The void was absolute.
No light. No sound. No air. Not even time itself dared to exist. It was a place of unyielding nothingness, where existence held no meaning, and the concept of life was a cruel joke.
Within this void drifted a single, nameless soul.
How long had it been there? Minutes? Centuries? The soul couldn’t tell. Trapped in this purgatory, there was no sensation, no thought—only an endless, silent blackness.
But then, something shifted.
A sudden force, like a cosmic vacuum, gripped the soul. It had no time to react, no chance to resist as it was yanked violently from the void. Light—blinding, overwhelming light—burst into view for the first time in what felt like eternity.
And then—CRASH!
The soul, now encased in a physical form, plummeted from the heavens and smashed into the scorching sands of a desert.
Slow pace. We warned!
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Viết đánh giáLooks promising, but the pacing is extremely slow. 12 chapters just for the Mc and Tony to scape from the desert... It deserves a read, but I recommend waiting for 30 chapters so we can have a real plot then
The story makes no sense, first of all why the f is the mc so horny to get / steal tonys money and arc in the early chaps if and i mean if u have Rimurus Whole Abilitys. This seems bland and dumb. if u have nothig to read then this is the shit
Good story but like other review said pacing is slow and mc attitude I don't like it, he has rimurus skill, so then he can change into 25yr old man.. So other can know that he is male and not female but he doesn't do that... Other than that.. MC will be OP real quick with predator and great sage
Pure stupidity by furry femboi mc/author...first despite having great sage he wants some fkin stupid armour of tony knowing how strong rimuru gets in future making armour even greater what tony can imagine would be a child's play for mc but nah this mf author wants to make mc a femboi and a ret@rd...
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MC lands in marvel right next to tony in the desert after escaping capture. MC immediately thinks of killing tony and taking the arc reactor for no reason other think hes an idoit.... whats he gonna do its not even the upgraded arc reactor. Is he gonna build a suit. power a vacum. MORON!!
The story is nice in my honest opinion. However, the way it is written really makes me want to read more. Author, please continue, your FanFic is too good for me lol.
3.2 bcs chapter word count is short compared to the no of chapters. and bcs of that it's extremely slow pacing . I mean you just lengthen the story of 5 chap with good word count into 29 chapters with low word count. I am thankful for your work though but I need to tell you this critique.
the concept of bringing rimuru into marvel is not new, but fanfics about it are either too few or disappointing, so finding one that holds up is refreshing. keep it up.Frankly I feel threatened, the author is very good at negotiating, very good story
story is good. Some would not like mc characteristics but in the end it's a fanfic which is well written .
Great Book! Worth Wasting Oneself in Recreation Time. Hoping For The Best For The Author/Book & The Story To Be Grandly Complete. 🙏
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One of the Greatest Crossover fanfics I have ever read and still reading waiting for our Lord the author for more chapters [img=gift][img=recommend][img=strong][img=update]
its good mc got 1,300,000 skills at early .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... ..........
Tác giả Kazuma_trash
I like the powers within the context of the story, but the MC seems very dumb. He could do many things easily, but it feels like his neurons don’t connect enough to think about it. I could understand if it were impossible given his situation, but he just doesn’t do it because he lacks the ability to think of it—or at least that’s the impression it gives me.