Twilight Hunter

LV 11

Benoit_Valtin

frankly it's not a dark story, but boring and a bit stupid, once he understands that he is reincarnated in twilight, he doesn't say to himself that he must have a girlfriend (because it's a world of love stories) nor that he must have a power of some kind, no, just that he can sniff a little better than the others and that's it. frankly the mc is flat as a flounder, and the story is soporific ........

LV 14

OdinNeverSmile

well, I'm surprised to say this, this is a good Twilight I read here. (I don't read that many but the point stands and this is chapter 11 rn) MC is quite nice and I like his character. I hope this fanfic gets more chapters especially how it's going. I just hope there will be no bullshit Destiny Bond with the MC or he has like immune to it Bcs that's one of the cheapest and shitty tropes to get romance in my eyes and others too, especially letting a relationship organically play ou ist much better. I hope he stays Human and improves himself in another way maybe or is something unique. Maybe because it's a Vampire-related Universe. Maybe he gets something with blood. Like idk infuse the blood of animals or other creatures into himself to get some of thier traits or instincts, or maybe understand them better and get better at hunting them? or maybe something with ice or presence too because his character seems to lean toward those attributes/affinity. Nothing too strong but something stronger than normal humans but he still needs to put work and skill to fight supernatural creatures. Anyway, enough fanboying about abilities and possibilities. Simply I like this, I Want more of this, And I see potential.

LV 1

Rafael_Cabral_7563

Estou gostando da leitura, o plano de fundo do MC é muito interessante. Muito mistério envolvendo o próprio personagem, o que deixa aquele gosto de quero saber mais. Espero mais desenvolvimento e atualizações.

LV 12

masi_S

sounds fun looking forward to more [img=recommend]