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i really like the story and the concept but when i hear the conversations of rhaenys and corlys, it's like they keep saying same shit again and again, their observations and conversation with mc and etc. are too repatative and it becomes quite annoying to read. i mean it's 8-10 year old mc, so too much philosophy for him, so please keep the interactions logical. i really liked the first chapter in that regard.
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Loving this story so far. Glad to see a good HOTD story with some good writing and a different idea giving us Aemon Targaryen's Bastard instead of Daemon or Viserys or Baelon's. Can't wait to read more.
It’s one of the better stories I’ve read in recent times and has a unique plot and writing that make it really stand apart from stories I’ve read. It’s fun, intriguing, and really has kept my attention throughout the 10 chapters that are out so far, I am very excited for what’s to come. Cheers man 🍻.
i really like the story and the concept but when i hear the conversations of rhaenys and corlys, it's like they keep saying same shit again and again, their observations and conversation with mc and etc. are too repatative and it becomes quite annoying to read. i mean it's 8-10 year old mc, so too much philosophy for him, so please keep the interactions logical. i really liked the first chapter in that regard.
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Loving this story so far. Glad to see a good HOTD story with some good writing and a different idea giving us Aemon Targaryen's Bastard instead of Daemon or Viserys or Baelon's. Can't wait to read more.
It’s one of the better stories I’ve read in recent times and has a unique plot and writing that make it really stand apart from stories I’ve read. It’s fun, intriguing, and really has kept my attention throughout the 10 chapters that are out so far, I am very excited for what’s to come. Cheers man 🍻.