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This… is very rough. Grammar needs a ton of work, it’s barely passable. A lot of abilities are in here from different anime because gacha, mc wants to save the world and inherit uchiha madara’s will just because, with no explanation. He’s 19 and still in high school for some reason, a lot of things aren’t explained in this story, zero context for anything. Mc is terrible(as in bad character development), so many conflicting things that happen with him, and also no info to speak of either.
Looks good I don’t know yet but from your previous fic I know it will be good
I respect the MC for not wanting to become a slave. Yet, he becomes worse. He simply cannot think like a logical person and has a hero complex. Wanting to inherit Madara's will for peace? Why? Just because he can. Not to mention, he will befriend Issei. Really, bruh, Issei of all people? Why don't you just put a green hat on yourself, considering this was a harem fic. What a waste.
This… is very rough. Grammar needs a ton of work, it’s barely passable. A lot of abilities are in here from different anime because gacha, mc wants to save the world and inherit uchiha madara’s will just because, with no explanation. He’s 19 and still in high school for some reason, a lot of things aren’t explained in this story, zero context for anything. Mc is terrible(as in bad character development), so many conflicting things that happen with him, and also no info to speak of either.
Looks good I don’t know yet but from your previous fic I know it will be good
I respect the MC for not wanting to become a slave. Yet, he becomes worse. He simply cannot think like a logical person and has a hero complex. Wanting to inherit Madara's will for peace? Why? Just because he can. Not to mention, he will befriend Issei. Really, bruh, Issei of all people? Why don't you just put a green hat on yourself, considering this was a harem fic. What a waste.