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Brother, because the authors love to turn their MC into demons, personally I think being a fallen angel is more advantageous. Okokokokokokokkko okokokokokokokkko okokokokokokokkko
I am really like this story so far yet people are mad when he is turned into a devil more than 70% of fanfics for DXD the MC becomes a devil so it is just a plain stupid argument
I love this story. Thus, I really want more chapters, please and thank you. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, keep up the great work.
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Dont let the low rate review stop you, this story is actually good, though i admit that i didnt read before becauseni thought it would be bad since its so bad rated, but if you forget about the premisse and just read as a DxD story where the MC doenst know DxD is teleported to ?600? years before the cannon you will see thats it is a good story
This is really good as of chapter 41! Keep up the effort and ignore the idiots giving 1 stars for a reason that doesn't actually exist. He's not a slave, it's quite clearly pointed out if you keep reading. Does everyone forget that the author makes the rules when writing a fanfic? What he says goes, who cares that devil pieces usually mean slavery in other fics.
The MC is a devil. I keep reading a few chapters hoping he might be able to reverse it some how but that seems like not happening. So if that's not your cup of tea, like it isn't mine. Don't waste your time like I did. But if you don't find that a deal breaker (you should but hey! it's your life) this story wasn't bad at all as far as I've read it.
Thay are complaning about MC being a slave ,, when in fact he was reincarnated by a prototype Evil pice and sarafall and ajuka thenselfs said that he has no obligation like WORKING under them = The slavery system isnt even established as that happend in or after Devil Civil War The funny thing is They think Ajuka is Batman as in always paranoyed about every.single.thing !! Ajuka is not Bruse wayn . He has frends, family, He is Read Reachard smart just not THAT reckless and NOT traumatysed psycotic Bruse wayn
another trash dxd ff where mc just become sl@ve to the devil. whats even the point of reading this trash any further. sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC
This is just to inform future possible readers that the 1 star reviews you see on this novel are essentially just slander. They likely don't like some plot detail or something the author said so have decided to review bomb. People were unfairly review bombing this novel so simply I thought I'd give an actual review to actually help. First of all people are saying that the synopsis & title don't make sense... That is a rather stupid judgement as there haven't even been twenty chapters however he is planning to make a Mystic Arts faction while the synopsis has already been met. Due to the lack of chapters I didn't want to write a review as there isn't much to mention. What there is I like as the pacing is good with the characters being grabbing enough for me to sit down & read in one sitting. He is in the new world after getting backstabbed by his master by chapter 2... What doesn't make sense about that? The story is also something you can follow along with, even if it isn't your cup of tea, so hardly one star worthy. The updates appear to drop every couple days while the writing quality is such that I do not remember any mistakes nor has anyone commented on it in the reviews. As such I'll give it a pass. Either way it was clearly readable so revealing that those who gave it a complete one star are simply false reviews. Character design... So far Serafall seems fine but not much to judge it however, once again, not worth a one star by far. World background is using DxD and nothing has been ouright butchered so that is fine. If people vote 1 star on that it makes you wonder why they even bothered reading a DxD novel in the first place.
Happy for a while cuz my fav anime(dxd) mixed in but sad cuz 2-3 girls in harem. what a letdown 😒, we all know how dxd story goes. can't believe i have to say this🤦 Issei is better than author
The story is pretty decent, I see a lot of people hating on it for the MC becoming a devil through evil pieces. I assume since he used a prototype piece there's no slave feature yet, just turning into a devil. I made that assumption using one of the author notes, the author addressed all the hate this Fic is getting and said something about not becoming a slave, I don't necessarily remember what he exactly said.
Dude your writing is soo good. Will you please write something on TV fanfics like; The 100, The Vampire Diaries and its spinoffs, Teen Wolf, Game of thrones, etc. Will love to see your fanfics on those. I kinda not like marvel fanfics, cause, marvel has beings who can see the literal futures. And if there is an anomaly in the timeline, the TVA will handle it, so the sacred timeline doesn't branch. Some authors give reason that they see predictions not futures. But then what about TVA, watchers, one above all, cosmic beings, etc.
The title is quite misleading. The MC started out as a sorcerer but quickly became a Reincarnated Devil upon arriving in DxD and it's not even DxD canon but rather the past during the great war so we have an MC who isn't even a Sorcerer and a fic that doesn't actually take place in DxD.
It’s honestly insulting how he lures with the title and description but fail to deliver this badly in the story…
Bruh that synopsis is a hot mess. I think your premise has potential, but you gotta work on your flow and word choice. Try reading out loud what you write
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Lo primero que pensé luego de leer la premisa fue que crossover más interesante y realmente lo es casi todo de esto me gusta lo único que no lo hace es el ritmo ls historia hasta donde voy no ha avanzado mucho
Author blue balled us if you dare to blue ball now I will curse you that you will never pop your cherry if you didn't or or.... or yes you will always be blue balled hmph .👿👿👿
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Brother, because the authors love to turn their MC into demons, personally I think being a fallen angel is more advantageous. Okokokokokokokkko okokokokokokokkko okokokokokokokkko
I am really like this story so far yet people are mad when he is turned into a devil more than 70% of fanfics for DXD the MC becomes a devil so it is just a plain stupid argument
I love this story. Thus, I really want more chapters, please and thank you. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please, keep up the great work.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Dont let the low rate review stop you, this story is actually good, though i admit that i didnt read before becauseni thought it would be bad since its so bad rated, but if you forget about the premisse and just read as a DxD story where the MC doenst know DxD is teleported to ?600? years before the cannon you will see thats it is a good story
This is really good as of chapter 41! Keep up the effort and ignore the idiots giving 1 stars for a reason that doesn't actually exist. He's not a slave, it's quite clearly pointed out if you keep reading. Does everyone forget that the author makes the rules when writing a fanfic? What he says goes, who cares that devil pieces usually mean slavery in other fics.
The MC is a devil. I keep reading a few chapters hoping he might be able to reverse it some how but that seems like not happening. So if that's not your cup of tea, like it isn't mine. Don't waste your time like I did. But if you don't find that a deal breaker (you should but hey! it's your life) this story wasn't bad at all as far as I've read it.
Thay are complaning about MC being a slave ,, when in fact he was reincarnated by a prototype Evil pice and sarafall and ajuka thenselfs said that he has no obligation like WORKING under them = The slavery system isnt even established as that happend in or after Devil Civil War The funny thing is They think Ajuka is Batman as in always paranoyed about every.single.thing !! Ajuka is not Bruse wayn . He has frends, family, He is Read Reachard smart just not THAT reckless and NOT traumatysed psycotic Bruse wayn
another trash dxd ff where mc just become sl@ve to the devil. whats even the point of reading this trash any further. sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC sl@ve MC
This is just to inform future possible readers that the 1 star reviews you see on this novel are essentially just slander. They likely don't like some plot detail or something the author said so have decided to review bomb. People were unfairly review bombing this novel so simply I thought I'd give an actual review to actually help. First of all people are saying that the synopsis & title don't make sense... That is a rather stupid judgement as there haven't even been twenty chapters however he is planning to make a Mystic Arts faction while the synopsis has already been met. Due to the lack of chapters I didn't want to write a review as there isn't much to mention. What there is I like as the pacing is good with the characters being grabbing enough for me to sit down & read in one sitting. He is in the new world after getting backstabbed by his master by chapter 2... What doesn't make sense about that? The story is also something you can follow along with, even if it isn't your cup of tea, so hardly one star worthy. The updates appear to drop every couple days while the writing quality is such that I do not remember any mistakes nor has anyone commented on it in the reviews. As such I'll give it a pass. Either way it was clearly readable so revealing that those who gave it a complete one star are simply false reviews. Character design... So far Serafall seems fine but not much to judge it however, once again, not worth a one star by far. World background is using DxD and nothing has been ouright butchered so that is fine. If people vote 1 star on that it makes you wonder why they even bothered reading a DxD novel in the first place.
Happy for a while cuz my fav anime(dxd) mixed in but sad cuz 2-3 girls in harem. what a letdown 😒, we all know how dxd story goes. can't believe i have to say this🤦 Issei is better than author
The story is pretty decent, I see a lot of people hating on it for the MC becoming a devil through evil pieces. I assume since he used a prototype piece there's no slave feature yet, just turning into a devil. I made that assumption using one of the author notes, the author addressed all the hate this Fic is getting and said something about not becoming a slave, I don't necessarily remember what he exactly said.
Dude your writing is soo good. Will you please write something on TV fanfics like; The 100, The Vampire Diaries and its spinoffs, Teen Wolf, Game of thrones, etc. Will love to see your fanfics on those. I kinda not like marvel fanfics, cause, marvel has beings who can see the literal futures. And if there is an anomaly in the timeline, the TVA will handle it, so the sacred timeline doesn't branch. Some authors give reason that they see predictions not futures. But then what about TVA, watchers, one above all, cosmic beings, etc.
The title is quite misleading. The MC started out as a sorcerer but quickly became a Reincarnated Devil upon arriving in DxD and it's not even DxD canon but rather the past during the great war so we have an MC who isn't even a Sorcerer and a fic that doesn't actually take place in DxD.
It’s honestly insulting how he lures with the title and description but fail to deliver this badly in the story…
Bruh that synopsis is a hot mess. I think your premise has potential, but you gotta work on your flow and word choice. Try reading out loud what you write
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Lo primero que pensé luego de leer la premisa fue que crossover más interesante y realmente lo es casi todo de esto me gusta lo único que no lo hace es el ritmo ls historia hasta donde voy no ha avanzado mucho
Author blue balled us if you dare to blue ball now I will curse you that you will never pop your cherry if you didn't or or.... or yes you will always be blue balled hmph .👿👿👿
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