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The Story development as well as characters show a distinct focus. World background is good and the overall interactions between characters and monsters is amazing. Writing Quality I never give 5 stars to anyone because people will always screw up and it allows for people not to get a big head. Keep up the work author! Fighting!
Hey author, I like the story but I would like to say a few things regarding some changes that you would need to make:- the story would start to go downhill unless you edit the MC's personality starting from the 110+ chapters as I read further on. and it got boring as MC didn't have/show any emotions when interacting with people and had absolutely no sense of what his discoveries meant to others, and he just started popping out evolutions left and right not caring what sort of impact he was having and how he never gave a logical reasoning for the evolutions he came up with, other than that I also hate how others just are there to just hype the MC up and nothing else
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Hay otras historia con el mismo nombre y más capítulos 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😃🤣😃🤣🤣🤣🤣😃😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣😃😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃
There's something exciting about reading a mc that can control beasts to do its bidding, guess I'm a succer for mcs who has a group of powerful members
Señor autor muchas gracias por dejar tu historia como un fanfic, es muy buena, si es posible me gustaría que lo no lo cambies de sección, o me perdería está magnífica historia.
Lessgo guys~ Ask anything you want below this message and please leave a review~ Update Scedule: 1/2 Chaps/Day
The Story development as well as characters show a distinct focus. World background is good and the overall interactions between characters and monsters is amazing. Writing Quality I never give 5 stars to anyone because people will always screw up and it allows for people not to get a big head. Keep up the work author! Fighting!
Hey author, I like the story but I would like to say a few things regarding some changes that you would need to make:- the story would start to go downhill unless you edit the MC's personality starting from the 110+ chapters as I read further on. and it got boring as MC didn't have/show any emotions when interacting with people and had absolutely no sense of what his discoveries meant to others, and he just started popping out evolutions left and right not caring what sort of impact he was having and how he never gave a logical reasoning for the evolutions he came up with, other than that I also hate how others just are there to just hype the MC up and nothing else
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hay otras historia con el mismo nombre y más capítulos 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😃🤣😃🤣🤣🤣🤣😃😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣😃😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃🤣🤣😃😃
There's something exciting about reading a mc that can control beasts to do its bidding, guess I'm a succer for mcs who has a group of powerful members
Señor autor muchas gracias por dejar tu historia como un fanfic, es muy buena, si es posible me gustaría que lo no lo cambies de sección, o me perdería está magnífica historia.
Lessgo guys~ Ask anything you want below this message and please leave a review~ Update Scedule: 1/2 Chaps/Day