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Viết đánh giáThe story is original and exciting, but the chapters are a bit too long, try to reduce them in any case I can't wait to see where the story leads
complaint: chapters too long. overall: I love the way you potray your character and their personalities. p.s: keep going MR.Steel
Tiết lộ SpoilerThe story is original and exciting, but the chapters are a bit too long, try to reduce them in any case I can't wait to see where the story leads
complaint: chapters too long. overall: I love the way you potray your character and their personalities. p.s: keep going MR.Steel
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