Reviews of I Am In Konoha, I Can Simplify Skills by Jim_4613 - Webnovel

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LastGod

This is NOT english if u are going to write a story in english do better my eyes watered trying to read this absolute trash.

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ZxeroX
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Great concept ! But the grammer is horrible . I feel like he copy and past it from somewhere else . Since it randomly say advertisement throughout the chapter.

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Daoist_Empereur

Just bad the story could be better but you see the translation and the fact that this is a copy past and the author don’t even say that this is a translation

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You may want to have someone edit this. You have a good story, but your sentences are hard to read. Ut's like, u did a slap and paste for the translation.

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Daoist5RvI4q

I personally enjoyed it so far it a cool concept

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Mauricio_Goes

Not bad waiting for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistjqgeAo

I dont know how but you managed to make mtl chinese generic novels into shakespere's work with this novel of yours. Like bro what am I even reading? You should've let the AI do the work and even then it would turn out to be something readable.

3mth
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Alex_Kelian

The idea itself has potential but the actual execution is terrible, my advice is for whoever wrote this is to see how storys and novels are written and try learning from them at least .

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Matrix98209

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Dracon_Flag_Bearer

The writing quality is going downhill from chapter 1.

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ExoticSenta

Didnt read it, just came to say: [Simplified Impregnation: Handholding!]

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Lizrock

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Ikaru5

Read it at your own risk. If you’re someone who understands English this story will give you an headache. But if you’re not a native speaker go ahead maybe you can even enjoy it, but just maybe

3mth
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Daoistov8HHo

The story is ok but the translation is bad

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LastGod

This is NOT english if u are going to write a story in english do better my eyes watered trying to read this absolute trash.

2mth
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ZxeroX
LV 13 Badge

Great concept ! But the grammer is horrible . I feel like he copy and past it from somewhere else . Since it randomly say advertisement throughout the chapter.

2mth
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Daoist_Empereur

Just bad the story could be better but you see the translation and the fact that this is a copy past and the author don’t even say that this is a translation

2mth
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LV 4 Badge

You may want to have someone edit this. You have a good story, but your sentences are hard to read. Ut's like, u did a slap and paste for the translation.

2mth
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Daoist5RvI4q

I personally enjoyed it so far it a cool concept

3mth
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Mauricio_Goes

Not bad waiting for more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistjqgeAo

I dont know how but you managed to make mtl chinese generic novels into shakespere's work with this novel of yours. Like bro what am I even reading? You should've let the AI do the work and even then it would turn out to be something readable.

3mth
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Alex_Kelian

The idea itself has potential but the actual execution is terrible, my advice is for whoever wrote this is to see how storys and novels are written and try learning from them at least .

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Matrix98209

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Dracon_Flag_Bearer

The writing quality is going downhill from chapter 1.

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ExoticSenta

Didnt read it, just came to say: [Simplified Impregnation: Handholding!]

3mth
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Lizrock

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Ikaru5

Read it at your own risk. If you’re someone who understands English this story will give you an headache. But if you’re not a native speaker go ahead maybe you can even enjoy it, but just maybe

3mth
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Daoistov8HHo

The story is ok but the translation is bad

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