OFA In The World of Honkai

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Ballad

Loving it, I usually dislike hero minded MCs but MC is the likeable type of MC who isn't some annoying cringe justice hero gubbler.

LV 14

i3bdul

I rarely make reviews but i just felt like i had to for this FF it might have less than 30 chapters currently but what it did in those chapters other stories can't replicate or take hundreds of chapters to get close to what I'm basically saying is this shit is goated.

LV 15

_V1_

Words alone cannot describe how good this story is.

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Abhijith_Nair_1948

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Ireallylikereading

despite the mc being stupid thats pretty much all you can really complain about if we're being fair here, this review is lazy i know but at least you got something. anyways character development is done good, the world background is awesome (it already is since its honkai), the pace is nice haha didnt even notice it was past 30 chapters, and well umm sadly to say but the only worthwhile waifus here like kiana and maybe bronya if your into that are lesby or aren't possible. im using a laptop so it says my reading status is c14

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Kono_Dio_na

the eruption in the early chapter should be when mei awakened as a herrscher. weirdly, both kiana and mei are still in nagazora. they should have been transferred to st. freya after that eruption and unable to meet mei and kiana. i also slightly dissatisfied with the way mei talk which is different from canon. speaking of ofa power, although i don't know what author's plan, it's kinda conflict with the herrscher of origin's power.

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Axas

What else i can say? I love this. I love the concept of Ofa that you bring here. I theorize that the previous ofa users were all flamechasers. Well, there is certain thing that bothers me, like Mei's slightly different personality, and also the slightly chaotic timeline where the 3rd impact that happened seemed like it didn't happen... So yeah, that's it.

LV 14

Gudzore47

Man, that was amazing. it's not a perfect one. Especially the MC, sometimes he's so annoying, but I think that was his charm. He's closer to Midoriya Izuku at the beginning of the MHA series,when he's just someone that's trying to become a hero, but much more mature than Izuku I guess.

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Hutaosteacup

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LV 4

Shadowhex

Best honkai fanfic I have read. Great MC and great character interactions and development. Dying for the updates.

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DaoistjGKUYX

una carta de amor a la literatura. .....................................................................................................................

LV 2

Kuroki2112

Increible hasta ahora, me encanta la escritura y que hallas escrito una buena historia acerca de como llego el One For All a Honkai impact, me encanta hasta ahora.

LV 4

Lector1apresurado

Bien hecho casi todo , pero tendrás que ver cómo hacer que mei se convierta en tercer hertteck ( mal puesto el nombre ) por qué se supone que ellas no van a ser valkirias en realidad nadie sabe que existen las valkirias todo está oculto y van a ser valkirias 1 . Liana esta buscando a su padre 2 . Se causo un caos grande en nagazora y luego la tía de liana la encuentra ahí 3. A mei no le queda de otra por qué es una amenaza honkai para que la vigilen

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Daoist3PgKGI

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Heyman29

I just read all the current chapters (42), simply amazing. It's very exciting to see MC's evolution. It's really satisfying to see his progress, slowly going from a mere civilian to a hero.