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this is seems like its gonna be about moss head replacing the captain of the black bulls and just the same story as the original. how is he gonna have his own story? Everytime i see a black clover fanfic i see 0 original thought.
Now that I've read all the chapters , i feel like now I can make a review . The Things that i didn't like : The mc itself at the beginning wasn't really mashing well together with the rest of the cast . Felt little bit forced at the beginning. Also if I'm not wrong , this isn't Zoro himself . Someone who was born as Zoro. It seems author tried to emulate Zoro's personality in the story which comes as a little bit off . Zoro in OP isn't really rude or dense . I would describe him as incredible blunt . This felt like mc doesn't have any original personality and it makes it little bit bland . Also , it feels incredibly fast paced The things i liked : Well , it gets immensely better in fighting department , especially the last arc of fighting in the capital . I would like more of it . Moreover, writing also good . I haven't notice any major grammar issues. Suggestions : You can incorporate mc's past , afterall, he's an reincarnated individual . He isn't really zoro. Try to slow the pace down . Add more interactions You're a good author . So keep it up .
liked the concept, just didn't like how fast the story is going, there's barely any dialogue going on any chapters
im only on chapter 3, but i just wanna say, at this point, why not just make MC Zoro himself? MC has a bad sense of direction like Zoro, and how he acts is like Zoro, what the point of have someone from earth then? i could be wrong since like only on chapter 3
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I like the concept, and so far the execution is good so I have high expectations from this fic
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Well the concept sounds interesting. Will give it a go. Hopefully you not drop it.
Don't even bother looking at theese reviews. I honestly got addicted to this novel and by far i see its the best black clover novel I've seen till now. Keep up the good work author👍🏻
this is seems like its gonna be about moss head replacing the captain of the black bulls and just the same story as the original. how is he gonna have his own story? Everytime i see a black clover fanfic i see 0 original thought.
Now that I've read all the chapters , i feel like now I can make a review . The Things that i didn't like : The mc itself at the beginning wasn't really mashing well together with the rest of the cast . Felt little bit forced at the beginning. Also if I'm not wrong , this isn't Zoro himself . Someone who was born as Zoro. It seems author tried to emulate Zoro's personality in the story which comes as a little bit off . Zoro in OP isn't really rude or dense . I would describe him as incredible blunt . This felt like mc doesn't have any original personality and it makes it little bit bland . Also , it feels incredibly fast paced The things i liked : Well , it gets immensely better in fighting department , especially the last arc of fighting in the capital . I would like more of it . Moreover, writing also good . I haven't notice any major grammar issues. Suggestions : You can incorporate mc's past , afterall, he's an reincarnated individual . He isn't really zoro. Try to slow the pace down . Add more interactions You're a good author . So keep it up .
liked the concept, just didn't like how fast the story is going, there's barely any dialogue going on any chapters
im only on chapter 3, but i just wanna say, at this point, why not just make MC Zoro himself? MC has a bad sense of direction like Zoro, and how he acts is like Zoro, what the point of have someone from earth then? i could be wrong since like only on chapter 3
mc use a katana.........................................................................................................................................................
make dorothy the lover [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the concept, and so far the execution is good so I have high expectations from this fic
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Well the concept sounds interesting. Will give it a go. Hopefully you not drop it.
Don't even bother looking at theese reviews. I honestly got addicted to this novel and by far i see its the best black clover novel I've seen till now. Keep up the good work author👍🏻