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Come from good novel... I'm glad that you have a new novel to publish...this one got potentials... looking forward for the xx scene 😉
As an author of this novel, I had to follow the tradition and leave my review here. this novel is brand new, and the ideas I got when writing them is flowing smoothly. the adult scene, to me, is quite good. anyway do enjoy the new story. someone asked me if i was asian, yes i am, i am southasian, that should be enough answer for now.
its definitely develop in a steady pace... I liked the similar vibes to Fallout games, with a style an twist of your own...but do, improve on the conversation structure a little bit...sometimes it just feel a little bit..Off...I guess??...anyway gud luck.pal[img=update]👍👍[img=thinking]
Come from good novel... I'm glad that you have a new novel to publish...this one got potentials... looking forward for the xx scene 😉
As an author of this novel, I had to follow the tradition and leave my review here. this novel is brand new, and the ideas I got when writing them is flowing smoothly. the adult scene, to me, is quite good. anyway do enjoy the new story. someone asked me if i was asian, yes i am, i am southasian, that should be enough answer for now.
its definitely develop in a steady pace... I liked the similar vibes to Fallout games, with a style an twist of your own...but do, improve on the conversation structure a little bit...sometimes it just feel a little bit..Off...I guess??...anyway gud luck.pal[img=update]👍👍[img=thinking]