Maids VS Apocalypse

LV 13

SHADEWHISPER

Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading.

LV 2

3rdworldsurvivor

Nice start. Can't wait to pirate it😂😂😂😂😂😂

LV 2

EyeSmile

Some of the paragraphs were a bit long, recommend re writing them down, or splitting them up too around 50 words or less. Those blocks with the speech that humans can’t understand should be changed. Some of them felt pointless. (A lot of this I’ve learned while writing my book, I’m having to go back through and edit it heavily.) Other than that, was chilling. Cool plot and all that. Let me know if you would like to trade shout outs or collections or something.

LV 4

Whycanti

Decent start, but why must you lock the chapters!!? 😭😭😭 I just hope the author keeps up the daily update and not neglect the book like his other series.

Good book, lots of interesting action and awesome writing quality the author has some good writing technics and abilities, I would like to see this book at the top

LV 4

desudesu22

Not what I expected from a story with apocalypse in the title. It's actually better than expected.

LV 2

Mr_Alive

Please don't drop! I want to see where this goes!!!!

LV 4

IzannahFrame

Mark White is an interesting character. He's fun and relatable at times. Great job with the writing quality too, author.

LV 14

i3bdul

in my opinion the story is pretty good the Fourth breaks are pretty nice The only thing that I'm surprised about is how small the amount of readers / viewers this story deserves better.

LV 2

hello999

Bro what is this😭 the quality is actually good

LV 3

Iwantocook

2nd review . just to tell you , i will wait till 200 chapters

LV 4

APHELIOUS

It's pirating time. Hehe thank you very much author.