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I like it, but I don't like how you added romance right on the get go. It was so rushed and out of character for both Nojiko and Haku.
4/5/5/4/5 It's good, a touch of amateurishness in the writing bleeds through every now and again, but it's only endearing since it puts into perspective the amount of effort and carefulness it would take from a new author to make the rest of the story seem natural and polished. Some writing decisions offhand don't make sense but work fine in the flow of the story, and sometimes the comedy doesn't really hit for me but all-in-all that part is fine. I REALLY love the concept of an animal companion and I think the idea is executed wonderfully, I like the MC though I think he's a bit too much of a Gary Stu (not particularly a fan of when fanfic protags overshadow the Straw Hats), protags combat style and powers are unique and refreshing to read. The Slice-of-Life moments truly feel like they'd be scenes straight out of One Piece, the character interactions are quite well-written. I hope he splits off from the Straw Hats like he's intending to so this fic doesn't fall to the wayside like all the other One Piece story's that act like retellings of the canon plot. Good fic. 👍🏻
I'm still only on the 3rd chapter and I'm hooked to this story. Like damn this is so good i just hope you don't drop it because every fanfiction that I like get's dropped 🥲
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Wow i expected a shiddy Chinese Translation, what i got IS a really good SI fic, the MC IS pretty chill and strong for the Blues and Paradies of Grandline, he also got No incredible Goals from the start Like Getting the one piece world Domination or a Harem, Just to be free, adventuring and maybe have a Family which is nice.
it's good, the characters feel 3D, there's plot changes but it mostly focuses on the mc's journey instead of how he affects luffy's. The mc also has a clear character. this story has lots of potential👍
It is a good novel so far however there was a small problem with the character design. The protagonist character is generic. You don’t See Haku part of the character in his everyday life you only see the character of the guy from our world from what I know Haku is a very peaceful guy he like to sit down and enjoy nature and his fighting style is different Haku is ninja and a Ninja are supposed to be light on there feet and precise and fast and deadly and he usually fight with needles of ice And his mirror of ice however the protagonist fight with spear of ice and face-to-face more like warrior and less like a ninja and don’t tell me about how there isn’t chakra in one piece cause not all ninja technique need chakra . maybe his fighting style will change in the future I’m not sure because it’s very early in the novel however this is my basic observation. I’m not the best person to judge about the character design. I don’t know sometime it can be very difficult to replicate a character who is already known so I’m not judging I’m only putting it out so they author might improve the character design and fighting style. and thank you for the good novel and where is the second chapter of the day? Cannot wait to see him meet Luffy specially when luffy discover haku is a ninja.
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The story so far has been phenomenal but a little rushed when it comes to catching to to og timeline and romance and the straw hats act out of character
I like it, but I don't like how you added romance right on the get go. It was so rushed and out of character for both Nojiko and Haku.
4/5/5/4/5 It's good, a touch of amateurishness in the writing bleeds through every now and again, but it's only endearing since it puts into perspective the amount of effort and carefulness it would take from a new author to make the rest of the story seem natural and polished. Some writing decisions offhand don't make sense but work fine in the flow of the story, and sometimes the comedy doesn't really hit for me but all-in-all that part is fine. I REALLY love the concept of an animal companion and I think the idea is executed wonderfully, I like the MC though I think he's a bit too much of a Gary Stu (not particularly a fan of when fanfic protags overshadow the Straw Hats), protags combat style and powers are unique and refreshing to read. The Slice-of-Life moments truly feel like they'd be scenes straight out of One Piece, the character interactions are quite well-written. I hope he splits off from the Straw Hats like he's intending to so this fic doesn't fall to the wayside like all the other One Piece story's that act like retellings of the canon plot. Good fic. 👍🏻
I'm still only on the 3rd chapter and I'm hooked to this story. Like damn this is so good i just hope you don't drop it because every fanfiction that I like get's dropped 🥲
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Wow i expected a shiddy Chinese Translation, what i got IS a really good SI fic, the MC IS pretty chill and strong for the Blues and Paradies of Grandline, he also got No incredible Goals from the start Like Getting the one piece world Domination or a Harem, Just to be free, adventuring and maybe have a Family which is nice.
it's good, the characters feel 3D, there's plot changes but it mostly focuses on the mc's journey instead of how he affects luffy's. The mc also has a clear character. this story has lots of potential👍
It is a good novel so far however there was a small problem with the character design. The protagonist character is generic. You don’t See Haku part of the character in his everyday life you only see the character of the guy from our world from what I know Haku is a very peaceful guy he like to sit down and enjoy nature and his fighting style is different Haku is ninja and a Ninja are supposed to be light on there feet and precise and fast and deadly and he usually fight with needles of ice And his mirror of ice however the protagonist fight with spear of ice and face-to-face more like warrior and less like a ninja and don’t tell me about how there isn’t chakra in one piece cause not all ninja technique need chakra . maybe his fighting style will change in the future I’m not sure because it’s very early in the novel however this is my basic observation. I’m not the best person to judge about the character design. I don’t know sometime it can be very difficult to replicate a character who is already known so I’m not judging I’m only putting it out so they author might improve the character design and fighting style. and thank you for the good novel and where is the second chapter of the day? Cannot wait to see him meet Luffy specially when luffy discover haku is a ninja.
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The story so far has been phenomenal but a little rushed when it comes to catching to to og timeline and romance and the straw hats act out of character