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I don’t usually like school setting but this story was quite interesting. Enjoyed every minute of it.
This story just isn’t my type. A few descriptive phrases. I can name a million things I don’t like about this story; such as the names, Kyle’s mom and aunt hazel, the writing style, etc. however, what I do appreciate is the author’s effort to try something different from the norm and protest against gun violence. It takes a lot of courage to post your own work online. Although in my eyes the story is not the most interesting , I’m sure there will be the right people who would support your journey as an author.
Here from FB :D Loved the cover, but the premise was so dark and gloomy that I almost dropped it. It's hard to believe that a constant top achiever who was even good at sports was getting bullied and NO ONE was doing anything about it. well, maybe it's just a different culture. The story's getting better (if not brighter) as the chapters go, and looking forward for a 'stronger' MC
It's my first time reading bl and I kinda like it The novel blend emotions well and it gives vivid descriptive scenes I also love the characters Good job author
Kyle and Ethan are my new favourites! I am so glad that Kyle found him! It starts off dark but gets better and better! This is an immersive, engaging and interesting read. I am one my way to read more!
I'm glad Kyle has someone like Ethan and Ethan's family who can give him the love and care he deserves. The story is very dark with lots of extreme negative thoughts, but the author is very good at writing and weaving everything together. I just want to give Kyle a big bear hug and fight off his bullies. He doesn't deserve any of this. I wonder why his family treats him that way... Looking forward to Kyle leaving behind his messed up family and just riding off into the sunset with Ethan 🥰
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I've read similar books like this one. Not quite original but the writing style is good.
Read till chapter 4, this is a thriller kind of romance and I'm up on it! The writing and characters is spot on, definitely my type in BLs, will try to farm points to unlock other chapters
Okay plot 10/10 I'm obsessed with Ethan and Kyle ☺️ OMG it's such a great story, I can't wait for more author ❤️
I don’t usually like school setting but this story was quite interesting. Enjoyed every minute of it.
This story just isn’t my type. A few descriptive phrases. I can name a million things I don’t like about this story; such as the names, Kyle’s mom and aunt hazel, the writing style, etc. however, what I do appreciate is the author’s effort to try something different from the norm and protest against gun violence. It takes a lot of courage to post your own work online. Although in my eyes the story is not the most interesting , I’m sure there will be the right people who would support your journey as an author.
Here from FB :D Loved the cover, but the premise was so dark and gloomy that I almost dropped it. It's hard to believe that a constant top achiever who was even good at sports was getting bullied and NO ONE was doing anything about it. well, maybe it's just a different culture. The story's getting better (if not brighter) as the chapters go, and looking forward for a 'stronger' MC
It's my first time reading bl and I kinda like it The novel blend emotions well and it gives vivid descriptive scenes I also love the characters Good job author
Kyle and Ethan are my new favourites! I am so glad that Kyle found him! It starts off dark but gets better and better! This is an immersive, engaging and interesting read. I am one my way to read more!
I'm glad Kyle has someone like Ethan and Ethan's family who can give him the love and care he deserves. The story is very dark with lots of extreme negative thoughts, but the author is very good at writing and weaving everything together. I just want to give Kyle a big bear hug and fight off his bullies. He doesn't deserve any of this. I wonder why his family treats him that way... Looking forward to Kyle leaving behind his messed up family and just riding off into the sunset with Ethan 🥰
the novel is pretty good novel and author does a really good job in character design and development
I've read similar books like this one. Not quite original but the writing style is good.
Read till chapter 4, this is a thriller kind of romance and I'm up on it! The writing and characters is spot on, definitely my type in BLs, will try to farm points to unlock other chapters
Okay plot 10/10 I'm obsessed with Ethan and Kyle ☺️ OMG it's such a great story, I can't wait for more author ❤️