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you should make the changes(when mc is a slave) arc longer it fells rushed
if your looking for a fic with an epic tale being told then this is the one for you, it takes you on a journey with the protagonist, though pain and suffering, but aslo strangh, vengeance, and an unwavering will, you will be glued to it until you have to wait for more chapters
Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit
Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas páginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos
Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.
awsemoe to the atmost rate i like the story progress till now ,,every chapter excits me more and more
you should make the changes(when mc is a slave) arc longer it fells rushed
if your looking for a fic with an epic tale being told then this is the one for you, it takes you on a journey with the protagonist, though pain and suffering, but aslo strangh, vengeance, and an unwavering will, you will be glued to it until you have to wait for more chapters
Mcs fruit needs to be more explained it can’t just be a “dragon” fruit. And the pocket dimension ability just doesn’t fit with a zoan fruit
Primero para esta aventura. Depósito la fe con un granito de arena (y para motivarte a que sigas esta magnifica obra muy poco vista en estas páginas) muy buen comienzo, espero verla terminada. No te desmotives en el tema de personas porque vendrán a su debido tiempo. Nada más que decir nos vemos y ojala la obra llegue lejos. Ánimos
Author here with the usual shameless 5 stars. I'm a new author who loves reading and writing stories, please let me know if you have any suggestions, advice or questions.
awsemoe to the atmost rate i like the story progress till now ,,every chapter excits me more and more