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It snt that good Mc is op from the start and there is no point of continue the story with cause it doesn't entertain me Better try to write a story where MC start from a scratch not with too op superpower
everything was excellent. As an Indian, finding a good indian origin fanfic seems like searching for a needle in a haystack kind of difficulty. But now i have found it
Thanks brother for writing a novel which is correcting the past mistake and also taking india in superhero world. i love this novel very much.
You are doing a great job so far Great character development no edgelord or collecting girls like Pokemon Also i think first time someone reincarnated in India in alternative reality and did things for betterment of the country
I didn't wanted to post this review but I was forced to ............... ............... All I want to say is I am completely new author, so yeah if anyone wants to try out taking this idea and write a better story out of it I am fine with it......also I am writing this story as a timepass, so I don't really have a problem to drop this. ............... ............... Take care 🙏🙏
Story is great but dialogue and narration is somewhat poor.. every other line starts with sentences like 'with deep responsibility' or else..it seems redundant
Another harem novel. .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... . . .... ..... ... ............ . ...... ........ .......... .......... ............
Not bad. Writer likes to repeat himself which should be minimized. Reduce the family time, and focusing more on empire building and introducing new technology at a reasonable pace would make the story just perfect.
As an Indian who has read up on our history and hated the non-violence movement that divided and weakened our country I thank you for writing something every Indians fantasy keep it going i love it ❤️❤️❤️
I'm not an Indian or Bharat but i loved this story . Good job writing it , though MC a bit overpowered making it a bit hard for him to have character development .
Man good to see a indian novel finally with both marvel and independence damn thats something new love it but make it a little slow pace and pls increase the word count and some dedicated chapters on character development not to say much love it keep it up Full support [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Mc gets so op after getting his wish that's fine but i fail to see the point here. He should have reincarnated way before? India will get its independence with or without him if he had reincarnated way back in the past he should have been able to stop them from looting so many national treasures. If you get op mc it gets boring when yk he can bulldoze everything, it should focus on comedy. He can create skills so why does he even have to negotiate and play politics? Use shadow clones and create mind control or my altering skills and spread them all out. You can dominate the country in 2 chapters bruh. Mind control/mind reading may not be morally upright but you can turn bad guys into good guys or know all about their plans. Mc plans to make India better is nice and all but with a wish like that you can end the novel in next chapters. I'll rewrite my review after reading more.
It snt that good Mc is op from the start and there is no point of continue the story with cause it doesn't entertain me Better try to write a story where MC start from a scratch not with too op superpower
everything was excellent. As an Indian, finding a good indian origin fanfic seems like searching for a needle in a haystack kind of difficulty. But now i have found it
Thanks brother for writing a novel which is correcting the past mistake and also taking india in superhero world. i love this novel very much.
You are doing a great job so far Great character development no edgelord or collecting girls like Pokemon Also i think first time someone reincarnated in India in alternative reality and did things for betterment of the country
I didn't wanted to post this review but I was forced to ............... ............... All I want to say is I am completely new author, so yeah if anyone wants to try out taking this idea and write a better story out of it I am fine with it......also I am writing this story as a timepass, so I don't really have a problem to drop this. ............... ............... Take care 🙏🙏
Story is great but dialogue and narration is somewhat poor.. every other line starts with sentences like 'with deep responsibility' or else..it seems redundant
Another harem novel. .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... .......... . . .... ..... ... ............ . ...... ........ .......... .......... ............
Not bad. Writer likes to repeat himself which should be minimized. Reduce the family time, and focusing more on empire building and introducing new technology at a reasonable pace would make the story just perfect.
As an Indian who has read up on our history and hated the non-violence movement that divided and weakened our country I thank you for writing something every Indians fantasy keep it going i love it ❤️❤️❤️
I'm not an Indian or Bharat but i loved this story . Good job writing it , though MC a bit overpowered making it a bit hard for him to have character development .
Man good to see a indian novel finally with both marvel and independence damn thats something new love it but make it a little slow pace and pls increase the word count and some dedicated chapters on character development not to say much love it keep it up Full support [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Mc gets so op after getting his wish that's fine but i fail to see the point here. He should have reincarnated way before? India will get its independence with or without him if he had reincarnated way back in the past he should have been able to stop them from looting so many national treasures. If you get op mc it gets boring when yk he can bulldoze everything, it should focus on comedy. He can create skills so why does he even have to negotiate and play politics? Use shadow clones and create mind control or my altering skills and spread them all out. You can dominate the country in 2 chapters bruh. Mind control/mind reading may not be morally upright but you can turn bad guys into good guys or know all about their plans. Mc plans to make India better is nice and all but with a wish like that you can end the novel in next chapters. I'll rewrite my review after reading more.