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0ArtoriaPendragon0

Pleae don’t drop, your writing and stories are fantastic. Every day I look forward to seeing updated chapters from you. God bless you and your illiststions

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Austin_Hindman_9370

Love this and the Naruto story wish the author updated more often

2mth
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TaterRumble

Chapters feel like they are written by Chat GPT. Some paragraphs are just the same sentence said 3 different ways. Everything seems over explained which is something that most AI novels do. Maybe it's not totally written by AI but it's definitely being used to pad the word count. The MC is also already satan class in less than 15 chapters.

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3mth
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Adarsh_Raj_5200

Keep up the good work.... Great story. Fghrghrryuduishsgsjwhwtwuwiwgghwjshsghwhwgffusjwggejsjshshsuijhgghhhhhhhggffhhhddgfdjhddykbdtugddtuhhggyyttþfgyyuuihhryiihsfgy

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generatar_375

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4mth
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DaoistUpJ25l

Great story , the theme is new and interesting, a decent fanfic. Gsjsghshfsggtrfghsgshjwgwjwgwfuegfwuwhhwgwggeggegyrdajqkagsbkwowowpowojwhwgfcwgwgueueyshsgwghwffhffyrr

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4mth
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Igor_Oliveira

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4mth
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SATTIK_KUNKRI

Great story, the content is original, and the writing quality is also great, overall the story is both new and interesting, a good read. The main character does not have any system or anything though, still overpowered.

4mth
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Daffa_AlGhozy

The story is very interesting, there is rarely dxd fiction about a ber reincarnated into a demon from one of the 72 great clans plus another mc ber reincarnated into agares one of the strongest clans in dxd but rarely shown

4mth
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Abhirup_Mondal_8252

Great story with great potential, the MC has no cheats except great talent and his own mind, so not one of those stories where the MC is a system slave, a good read.

4mth
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Dracxvil

Never in my life had I thought I would come across a decent DxD Fanfic

4mth
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SlowWittedSong

it's pretty boring at this point. slow pace of development, no humor, no new ideas, at five years old he is already strong. Having read all the current chapters, I have no desire to read further. perhaps after the release of new chapters the story will become more interesting, but for now it’s rotten

5mth
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LT_Ryuu_X

It’s an alright story, there’s some stupid things that happened, like the whole underworld knows he has spce-time abilities like as soon as he’s born. I would of thought that the parents would want to keep the space a secret and have it as a trump card, but I guess not. When he’s having accidents with his control over his power they call in someone who is experts in time magic, which again is stupid as the accident was space based as things wear stretched, and why call a time expert when your whole family is a time based power family I would have thought that they were experts. Also in his past life he’s a scientist who’s obsessed with the control of time(that’s his personality basically). Now he’s being engaged to rias who is not smart and only comments about her beauty, i would think he would want smarts more like sona, when asked why not sona the only reason the aurther say no is because she is overused which I have only seen 1 maybe 2(the 2 was a harem). The farther also brings the mc to political meetings(he does not know he’s a person from another world) so a parent takes there 2 year old to a political meeting about his future(marriage) which i would think would make the child think he’s only being used(again the parents do not know he’s a person from another world).

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5mth
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KingPumpkin3

I like it so far especially his power but the conversations he has with other need some improvement but other than that it is good also what I was trying to say on my first review was if he was evil in his old world.

5mth
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Lordzbot

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5mth
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Bored_NPC_22

hello everyone, Author here, please do read the story..😁😁

5mth
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Voids_TrueOverlord

i will give 4.4 stars for new fanfiction....from first chapter i read i am ready like the story but don't know your update schedule....and thanks for consider my comment at chapter 1

5mth
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Ebonyslayer903

Only one chapter so far wasn’t any glaring grammatical errors story has alot of potential just needs to add regular updates and it’ll get a decent audience you should also get a synopsis for this story

5mth
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0ArtoriaPendragon0

Pleae don’t drop, your writing and stories are fantastic. Every day I look forward to seeing updated chapters from you. God bless you and your illiststions

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2mth
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Austin_Hindman_9370

Love this and the Naruto story wish the author updated more often

2mth
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TaterRumble

Chapters feel like they are written by Chat GPT. Some paragraphs are just the same sentence said 3 different ways. Everything seems over explained which is something that most AI novels do. Maybe it's not totally written by AI but it's definitely being used to pad the word count. The MC is also already satan class in less than 15 chapters.

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3mth
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Adarsh_Raj_5200

Keep up the good work.... Great story. Fghrghrryuduishsgsjwhwtwuwiwgghwjshsghwhwgffusjwggejsjshshsuijhgghhhhhhhggffhhhddgfdjhddykbdtugddtuhhggyyttþfgyyuuihhryiihsfgy

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4mth
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generatar_375

Good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Good GoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGoodGood

4mth
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DaoistUpJ25l

Great story , the theme is new and interesting, a decent fanfic. Gsjsghshfsggtrfghsgshjwgwjwgwfuegfwuwhhwgwggeggegyrdajqkagsbkwowowpowojwhwgfcwgwgueueyshsgwghwffhffyrr

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4mth
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Igor_Oliveira

+++++++++×××××××××××××++++++++++++++++++++++++++++××@@×××@!!!!!!!++++++++++++!!+!!!!!!!!!!+++!!!!!!!!!+++++++++++++!++!!!!!+++++++±+++++++×++××××××××××××××××××××+××××××

4mth
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SATTIK_KUNKRI

Great story, the content is original, and the writing quality is also great, overall the story is both new and interesting, a good read. The main character does not have any system or anything though, still overpowered.

4mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Daffa_AlGhozy

The story is very interesting, there is rarely dxd fiction about a ber reincarnated into a demon from one of the 72 great clans plus another mc ber reincarnated into agares one of the strongest clans in dxd but rarely shown

4mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Abhirup_Mondal_8252

Great story with great potential, the MC has no cheats except great talent and his own mind, so not one of those stories where the MC is a system slave, a good read.

4mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Dracxvil

Never in my life had I thought I would come across a decent DxD Fanfic

4mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
SlowWittedSong

it's pretty boring at this point. slow pace of development, no humor, no new ideas, at five years old he is already strong. Having read all the current chapters, I have no desire to read further. perhaps after the release of new chapters the story will become more interesting, but for now it’s rotten

5mth
Xem 0 lời trả lời
LT_Ryuu_X

It’s an alright story, there’s some stupid things that happened, like the whole underworld knows he has spce-time abilities like as soon as he’s born. I would of thought that the parents would want to keep the space a secret and have it as a trump card, but I guess not. When he’s having accidents with his control over his power they call in someone who is experts in time magic, which again is stupid as the accident was space based as things wear stretched, and why call a time expert when your whole family is a time based power family I would have thought that they were experts. Also in his past life he’s a scientist who’s obsessed with the control of time(that’s his personality basically). Now he’s being engaged to rias who is not smart and only comments about her beauty, i would think he would want smarts more like sona, when asked why not sona the only reason the aurther say no is because she is overused which I have only seen 1 maybe 2(the 2 was a harem). The farther also brings the mc to political meetings(he does not know he’s a person from another world) so a parent takes there 2 year old to a political meeting about his future(marriage) which i would think would make the child think he’s only being used(again the parents do not know he’s a person from another world).

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5mth
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KingPumpkin3

I like it so far especially his power but the conversations he has with other need some improvement but other than that it is good also what I was trying to say on my first review was if he was evil in his old world.

5mth
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Lordzbot

.......................,.......,.....................,.,.......,........,.,...,.,........,.....,....,..,..,..,.,.,. .,...,.,.,.,..,.,.,..,.,..,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,. .,..,.,.,.,.

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5mth
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Bored_NPC_22

hello everyone, Author here, please do read the story..😁😁

5mth
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Voids_TrueOverlord

i will give 4.4 stars for new fanfiction....from first chapter i read i am ready like the story but don't know your update schedule....and thanks for consider my comment at chapter 1

5mth
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Ebonyslayer903

Only one chapter so far wasn’t any glaring grammatical errors story has alot of potential just needs to add regular updates and it’ll get a decent audience you should also get a synopsis for this story

5mth
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