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Life can be very unfair most of the time, and Christopher is someone who knows this very well.
Being an orphan, his chances of achieving great things in life were close to nil. But things change when he meets his lover. However, a series of events lead to his death.
But that isn't the end. He wakes up in the body of someone just like him in another world, and with a system, one with an incredible ability.
With his newfound cheat, he completely sweeps his way through the world and beyond.
Angels? Demons? Dragons? Gods? Their titles don't matter, because in the end they will only have two options. Submit or die.
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Viết đánh giáThis novel is very good, and I like the premise, but author, please double-check your spellings and grammar before uploading. Actual review: The story is good, but as there are less than 20 chapters uploaded, I can't say much for progression in the plot. The MC actually has a brain which is good for readability and helps with retaining readers. (I really hope there isn't a harem because I don't enjoy reading those types of stories.) Toodles
So the MC dies after seeing his GF out with another man. he then proceeds to get OP but remains loyal even when a vampire lady offers herself quoting he has someone to get back to. this tanked the character design for me because he owed that gf nothing. there wasn't enough relationship buildup for me to care, no trials they overcame other than he was lonely. the loyalty he gives her is not warranted. everything else would make this a great story. slight grammar issues but nothing you won't find in other novels.
Tiết lộ SpoilerCouldn't endure reading 10 chapters I can understand you want to make MC underdog with a difficult life to make readers cheer and connect etc but the guy is such a loser to the point of being unrealistic. Anyone with decent intellect and logic would have done a better job than him a complete waste of cheats.
Tenía potencial, lamentablemente el coeficiente intelectual del protagonista es negativo ....skzndkxndkxkdkxue k kxd Xidkxuenxuencudkxjec Xuencuekcjekc7r
Hmm.. about character named joan, she shouldnt have dated him at all.. just friends with hidden feelings might have been enough in my opinion, she is really an idiot, if she knew that she and the mc are from diffrent backgrounds from the start then she still started liking him nonetheless which is really stupid if you think, and okay.. one can argue that one cant control ones feelings then be that it may she could have just kept the feelings hidden if she couldnt go through with till the end right.. what frustrating is that mc likes her even after seeing her kiss someone even if there is a big reason behind it. In my opinion even if there is a need for a kiss for the story to pogress as it is , i think a peck on the cheek could have been better... than a kiss on the lips right? actually considering her extreme feelings of love that was displayed there shouldnt be a kissing in the first place.. right author?( And if you are going to tell me that she only realised her extreme feelings when he died after one tear of being together i wint believe it..)
Tiết lộ SpoilerIn this, the way of getting powered up fast is done in a way that makes it okay , but not too fast, such that there is always the element of mystery and doubt in all times.. I like it that the system didnt make him omnipotent in an instant..
stupid NTR plot that these authors use to get attention, and it doesn't matter the reason but you don't kiss another man in public when you supposedly have someone else in your heart and if it's out of fear of his family then she would do worse things for him good of the mc.. typical disgusting NTR plot.. If you get past the first chapter without feeling disgusted then good luck.
This novel has great potential. World building is great can't wait to see the author deepen it even further. won't say to much here but take a minute to read and give it a chance it will surprise you.
Tác giả Bj_Omonobi_4986
mild NTR here, mc got cheated on and cucked in chapter 1. Proceed with caution and from what i see, he still likes her