Danmachi: I Have A Type-Moon Gacha System!

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heavenlydawn_

I know this time .........I'd win!........

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Elemise

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Aster_ainosDaoist

A very good fanfic well constructed with interesting characters and an encouraging beginning a relatively well explained and detailed world as well as for the interactions between the characters. Frequent updates and weekly content provided and maintained. I wish more visibility for this fanfic which has potential as well as more reviews to increase its visibility. If I have to make a criticism it is chapters a little short which do not always introduce clearly and with context but this can be introduced later if it is a voluntary fact of the author example Arcueid Brunestud

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jaro_onody

Is this a repost? I definitely feel like I’ve read this before.................................................................................

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Hilzuu

i hope u dont make MC to OP in short time.

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Tyler_rigby

I've read something like this before is this a translation

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Nameless_123g

The story is a complete AU with too many leaps of logic, characters losing braincells for no reason and too much unnecessary complication which i hope will be explained more. Author you better be cooking something here.

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Psan

Worth it, but im worried about mc being so overpowered so fast, he will have no chance to meet girls like Tiona and Lily before he is way to powerful.

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InmortalE

The story is good, I will not deny it, however it has two big flaws, one is that the author complicated the story too much and two is that he exaggerated things greatly. Other than that, it's a good read.

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ilove_3260

If you do drop it don’t delete it

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Tony_Jones_5420

Like the writing and idea of the moon system. Only real problem is the standard mic that doesn’t care about others. Almost feels like mic is playing a video game and is not living in the world.

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Voids_TrueOverlord

this book is the best one after many fanfic i read about danmaci that so-so but This one is the best as far i know.....keep up author

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fireparasptrite

its good

El início me recoerda de otra história su nombre es < Soy el protagonista de Danmachi >Pero creo que hay pequenos câmbios. Es que lei lá história ase como 2 anos.

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Xmpr30

Its pretty mid because: - MC is unnecessarily paranoid. Like guy wears a cloak everywhere as according to him everyone is out to kill him. Wearing a cloak would get more attention. - I read to Ch 21, but there's no romantic action yet not even a hint from the MC. That said it's pretty decent if you don't mind the things above, and has good weak-strong element to it.

I am on chapter 41 and am really enjoying the story. the only bad thing about it is that the updates are very few and inconsistent.

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DaoistLLOVLK

Autor hay algunos personajes que recuerdan algo que de una línea de tiempo pasada? Y si es así hay más de dos o puede ser otra cosa? Y ya por curiosidad Lili también sabe algo?

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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente historia y no deja de sorprenderme y no suena forzado y tampoco aburre, muy buena trama y desarrollo de los acontecimientos y personajes también muy buen desarrollo se acercan y interactuan de forma pasiva

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DaoistLLOVLK

Excelente hermano 👌, este no deja de sorprenderme es fluido y no forzado, muy buena narrativa y desarrollo de personajes, solo quedaría ver las reacciones de los demás personajes principales, pues pienso que si Riveria y Aiz recuerdan algo que paso? Me preguntó los demás miembros de la familia Hestia recuerdan algo?

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DaoistLLOVLK

Hasta el momento no deja de sorprenderme la historia pero me preguntó cuál será el comportamiento de Freya será una celosa qué hará lo qué quiera o verá a Bell como a un igual al que tendrá respetar? O simplemente no se rendirá para conquistar su corazón?