**"Abyssal Sovereign: The Demon's Dominion"**

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lyonciv0

Author here, so check it out, if you are just reading it then welcome . give me your feedback and for those following it before from the previous title then let's go guys. happy to see you guys .. thanks for the love and support much appreciated

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UnwantedTraveler

Read 3 chapters. Really, all this is incoherent ramblings from a guy whose primary language is clearly not english. And then the Author also adds random pieces of texts in the chapter like: "Haha, the MC is so delusional he thinks he can just get stronger like that. Hahaha." Like, my brother in Christ, you wrote this shit. The MC is literally what you make him to be. If you yourself think that he is bad maybe you should idk, change it? That's all. Don't read this, writing style is dogwater, basicly zero world building, the MC just gets dropped in deus ex machina, the way to author writes down the MC's stat sheet is confusing and barely readable honestly. I really don't know what the hell people who like this are smoking.

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Sean_von_king

Best book with the best ruthless Mc . Just read it if you at into evil mc am talking evil evil .

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DAE_MONE

one word Good novel ... the author did an amazing job here . i love cruel MC

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Surrel

You should give this a try, hidden gem and love the story. Although I haven't caught up to latest chapter, I'll continue when more piles up. Can't wait to see what he cooks.

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Lonely_Apex

Author is definitely a gem. Good storyline, good writing that just improves the more chapters I read, awesome world and the story itself is great. This is definitely a gem among diamonds. I recommend this book to all those who loves great story.

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GTOKA

I hope it won't be romantic in the future because in my opinion love is an illusion and a big lie that everyone believes but it doesn't exist. In fact, there are some people who have a strong obsession with some people and think they are in love, but there is only obsession and madness. There are other people who sell their sexual obsession as love, which is nauseating.

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Terminator_x7

I have rarely been this dissatisfied with a book. It’s hard to decide where to even begin because every element feels like a complete mess. The world-building? Nonexistent. The author seems to have cobbled together ideas and characters blatantly borrowed from games, movies, and other stories without any effort to create something original. There’s no cohesive world, no sense of immersion, and certainly no thought put into how anything fits together. The basic laws of physics? Completely ignored. Everything is exaggerated to an absurd degree, and not in a fun or imaginative way—just nonsensical. The power system is equally horrendous, lacking any sort of structure, logic, or creativity. It feels like the author just threw random powers at characters without a thought to balance or depth. The plot is an utter disaster, with no clear direction or purpose. Events seem to happen arbitrarily, and the pacing is all over the place. There’s no tension, no stakes, and no reason to care about what’s going on. And don’t even get me started on the character development. The characters are flat, one-dimensional, and painfully juvenile. They lack any sort of growth or complexity, making it impossible to connect with them. Speaking of juvenile, the writing style is so childish it feels like it was written by an 8-year-old. There’s no sense of maturity, nuance, or sophistication. It’s filled with cringeworthy dialogue and overly simplistic descriptions that fail to evoke any emotion or imagery. Overall, this book is an exercise in frustration. It’s immature, unoriginal, and utterly devoid of anything resembling quality storytelling. I wouldn’t recommend it to anyone, not even as a guilty pleasure. Save your time and energy for something worthwhile.

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Primordial_Steeze

Author San, this novel is a dime a dozen...pls give us 2000 chapters of pure chaos..we will follow you till the end💯💯💯💯💯

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Zexeli

Thi deserves a beer 🍻 but you should really fix your paragraphs ._.

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BIG_DREAMER

Amazing absolutely a beautiful masterpiece when he said ruthless he really meant such a hidden gem truly recommend this book one of the best of the best don’t doubt it cause of low chapter.

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hiddenx

Everything was going well, the MC was indifferent to life and killed everyone without exception, he even killed Batman to MAKE FRIENDS WITH ANY WOMAN. I had a wonderful work, but I've had enough.

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bobarella_1234

this is something where I'd only read the free chapters but nothing more, I know sometimes you get tired and don't wanna right things out fully, but still using "ur" or "u" to replace "your" or "you're" is awful, it shows a lack of interest and effort in a story. I think if you could write down your ideas and then slowly form them into one single thought. This would be good. but right now, it feels like a 6 years old just rambling on about one of their fantasy's skipping from idea to another. Also, the power scaling is horrendous. he already reached rank one at just 18 chapters in and can suddenly move at the speed of light. Make sure you edit it. Don't just post right after writing it. Actually, read your stuff out loud so you don't sound like a 6 year old.