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Writing quality is above average, tho the author is human and he sometimes makes mistakes. Story development was going good with the introduction of marigold and its counterpart, but it fell off in the last chapter with the introduction of the two messed up couple. Nate not finding them in earlier chapters is understandable (he is a kid) but when they disbanded his strength skyrocketed during his time as an intergalactic hero(able to give life to planets, destroy an advanced civilization's army alone, and communicate and teleport to people from earth while in space) he should've found out about them. And even if Nate couldn't have know, i would imagine the old man(Nate's adoptive father the multi billionaire) would've kept tap of the other children he didn't buy if he knew how dangerous they could be. Character design is great, mc looks awesome, and the Pheonix is a beauty. Updating Stability is now in 1 star due to it being dropped (or so a commenter said) World Background was starting to get good, but because of the plothole i mentioned earlier(Story development) i will lower it to two stars. Ps. I hope this get rewritten as i haven't seen much Umbrella Academy fanfic in this app.
It’s a great fanific just wish he posts more chapters for all of us broke fokes 🥲😂
okay read through it all great then mc dating pheonix not the worst but still bad, Then Allison and patrick kid got the abillity to wish for shit and on her birthday cupcakes/cakes her wished are majorly increase like world end wishing, Greatest sell out ever bro how tf does allison kid scale that high from allison. (Highly wouldn't recommend) and the romance ain't good just.out of no where he was with phoenix, fc awful
This fic is really good, the author definitely knows how to keep things engaging, even if the MC is really strong, it doesn't drive down the writing quality at all. I especially like the interactions between the siblings, it feels so authentic and it's so funny to read. Overall a solid 5 ⭐.
author-san, Idk if you remember me but I am your very big fan , I have yet to see umbrella academy (can you give a summary of what it is )
Oooh, an umbrella academy fic? I just finished it a few days ago, well, go ahead. .................................... ................... ....... ........ .......,......
Absolutely amazing! Reasons 1. From shadow ( should say a lot) 2. Amazing portrayal and plot 3. First umbrella academy fic I’ve seen but I still love 4. I read on patreon where it has at least double current chapters and where you should read too 5. Like usual from shadow he does in depth research before writing which means a lot of this stuff is true (warning some stuff is still changed as this is a fanfic)
Five stars cause it is Shadow he never misses. Okay that’s a lie sometimes he do
I’ve really enjoyed reading this fanfic. You really nailed the character’s personalities and the story telling is awesome! It’s been a while since you last did an update, but I really hope you decide to keep going with it.
Writing quality is above average, tho the author is human and he sometimes makes mistakes. Story development was going good with the introduction of marigold and its counterpart, but it fell off in the last chapter with the introduction of the two messed up couple. Nate not finding them in earlier chapters is understandable (he is a kid) but when they disbanded his strength skyrocketed during his time as an intergalactic hero(able to give life to planets, destroy an advanced civilization's army alone, and communicate and teleport to people from earth while in space) he should've found out about them. And even if Nate couldn't have know, i would imagine the old man(Nate's adoptive father the multi billionaire) would've kept tap of the other children he didn't buy if he knew how dangerous they could be. Character design is great, mc looks awesome, and the Pheonix is a beauty. Updating Stability is now in 1 star due to it being dropped (or so a commenter said) World Background was starting to get good, but because of the plothole i mentioned earlier(Story development) i will lower it to two stars. Ps. I hope this get rewritten as i haven't seen much Umbrella Academy fanfic in this app.
It’s a great fanific just wish he posts more chapters for all of us broke fokes 🥲😂
okay read through it all great then mc dating pheonix not the worst but still bad, Then Allison and patrick kid got the abillity to wish for shit and on her birthday cupcakes/cakes her wished are majorly increase like world end wishing, Greatest sell out ever bro how tf does allison kid scale that high from allison. (Highly wouldn't recommend) and the romance ain't good just.out of no where he was with phoenix, fc awful
This fic is really good, the author definitely knows how to keep things engaging, even if the MC is really strong, it doesn't drive down the writing quality at all. I especially like the interactions between the siblings, it feels so authentic and it's so funny to read. Overall a solid 5 ⭐.
author-san, Idk if you remember me but I am your very big fan , I have yet to see umbrella academy (can you give a summary of what it is )
Oooh, an umbrella academy fic? I just finished it a few days ago, well, go ahead. .................................... ................... ....... ........ .......,......
Absolutely amazing! Reasons 1. From shadow ( should say a lot) 2. Amazing portrayal and plot 3. First umbrella academy fic I’ve seen but I still love 4. I read on patreon where it has at least double current chapters and where you should read too 5. Like usual from shadow he does in depth research before writing which means a lot of this stuff is true (warning some stuff is still changed as this is a fanfic)
Five stars cause it is Shadow he never misses. Okay that’s a lie sometimes he do
I’ve really enjoyed reading this fanfic. You really nailed the character’s personalities and the story telling is awesome! It’s been a while since you last did an update, but I really hope you decide to keep going with it.