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Viết đánh giá"I'm a diehard fan so this ff is for diehard fan as well" might motivate you to read this one but never expect a fresh great world building, so better not putting your hopes up. It's just the mc 'coby' stole luffy's limelight. Please I know you can do better since you love one piece. Maybe try to read some referrence like "One Piece: Path of Power". That one is a good example of foreshadowing things SPOILER BELOW! I'm fine with mc have harem including nami and robin (18+) but if you make coby steals straw hat's main fight, killing enemies right on his face, at least have them get char growth or development. Their strength, thought process, are still mostly the same, which is very weird. Idk which part of you being diehard fan when all you did has no substance on what makes OP a great show. freaking copying every abilities without side-effect openly but no response from WG and Marines are already touching the bottom line. your attention to detail is odd if you did it without any foreshadowing.
I really like your writing, so I would like to ask for permission to translate this novel of yours into my language. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I just got to chapter 141 and I can say without fear, it's the best One Piece fanfiction story on the site, for those who have doubts, you can read it without fear, you won't regret it, I just got to the current chapters, so the The anxiety of waiting for the update is great, and please author-sama, don't abandon this story
SPOILER ALERT FOR FIRST FEW CHAPTER‼️ As you can read the ff description, Coby would be the crew member with system cheat. I'm not gonna talking about the butterfly effects (like rocky port incident and post-wano events), but there is one thing I should remind you guys. Coby has the ability to copy a spesific move, even from a devil fruit one (with a fair cost). Coby copied Luffy's pistol, and proclaimed himself as "Coby the copy ninja" to them. I can see in the future how vast this ability would go, so you need to get ready for some weird thing that might happen. Hope you guys doesn't badmouth the Author-sama for his/her decision.
Tiết lộ SpoilerHonest review. The story is decently written, but it suffers from all the problems a story such as this may have. Following the canon is always an issue when writing a story, even more so if it's almost like the character was just inserted into the main crew without replacing anything/anyone. The problem with this one is that there are some spontaneous skips that feels so iffy, because, well.. what happened/should happen was pretty much what the same as the canon. Unfortunately, as I just said, the spontaneous skips will always feel off as it ruins the flow of the story. The development with Nami was fine too but went downhill with Nojiko's. Still acceptable since it would be a bit hard considering how little time he has for that, but it's something to consider with the future developments with the other girls. Build-up is important in romance, unless you take away the romance and just make it purely carnal, but even that has its own needed developments, albeit shorter.
I really liked the story in the beginning and thought it was very good. The skill weaver system is OP and I liked it until you decided to make it possible for him to use devil fruit abilities through it, which I really don’t like. Except for this, the story is really good but just that is enough for me to not want to continue reading this story.
Did this author delete any reviews? There's only one 2-star review and one 3-star review, the rest are 4 stars or 5, why is this fanfic's rating so low? I'll try to read it, I've never read a fanfic with Coby Mc
So far I'm really loving this book, at first I just really liked the energy in the description and was interested, but now I can say I'm a fan that the book is written quite well, so great job author!
I really enjoyed this novel. I hope you don't stop, no matter how much people criticize you. Don't listen to negative opinions and be affected by them because they will hurt you.
Nice job so far Need more chapter Vdrvvrgvyodiyditdiyxyixoyxyocoyxyocyocyocyochocohchochochochochochochocohcjochochochocohchocohchochocgoxohcohxhochochlxlhxlhxlhxhoxhochocho
story was good until he started copying devil fruit powers it is a skill weaver system not copy system
Tiết lộ SpoilerNice story I hope have 1 chapter per day That enough jdhdjudhdhshshshshshshsbshhshsbsbhzhxhxbzbzhzhzhxhshshdhdjdhjjshdjdjdjdhdjdjdbsbjdjdjdbsbdhxhdhsbdhhddhhdhdhdhsh
Nice story so far I hope author can make fallow until current cannon in one piece and have ended too
take some free support, for your troublesㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
It's an interesting fan-fic with great potential.😌 Hehe I appreciate the dream and goal of the mc, can't wait to read the rest of the adventure.😁 Author can you just confirm that there is no ntr and yuri? I hate that sh**
Сам фанфик просто следует сюжету с несколькими изменениями. На любителя. Грамматика хорошая. Но пока не зацепило. Будет больше глав, может и изменю свое мнение.
This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story
A good fanfic, it follows the canon but adds a nice touch to it, enough to make it more complex and fun, and with the romance added it makes it even better.
I like the idea. Haven't read any COby in one piece ff yet so this is new for me. Haven't read yet but I'm giving 5 stars for the sake of the wonderful idea and to appreciate the author. Gave all my power stones as well for the day. I'll go start reading when chapters reach 100, then I will go back to this review and edit it if needed. Good luck to the author and good job as well...
after seeing this in Manga i become even greater Coby Fan then i already was, im glad my favorite charakter on Marines side, Coby the Hero has so many fans and has storys writed about him.
voy a darle la oportunidad si me gusta seguiré apoyando al autor con piedras y mejorando la reseña [img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte]
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Ahoy, fellow adventurers! It’s time for that traditional, totally unbiased, and shameless review from yours truly. You know, sometimes you just have to toot your own horn, and today, I’m blasting mine like Luffy yelling, “I’m gonna be King of the Pirates!” So far, the story has hit a whopping 100 chapters (yes, you heard that right!). Out of these, 55 chapters have already been uploaded to Patreon for all you eager beavers who just can’t wait. The rest? Well, they will be sailing your way soon. But let’s not forget, they’re still drafts – raw and uncut Now, let’s get to the good stuff – why this novel is absolutely, undeniably, and without a doubt...awesome! Skill Weaver System that lets him copy, blend, and mash up abilities like some sort of OP smoothie maker. Imagine a blender filled with Haki, sword skills, and devil fruit powers, all mixed to perfection. Tasty, right? Can't you just smell it? You can't well, then read and see! But this isn’t just a skill-fest. There’s heart, humor, and enough twists and turns to make even the most seasoned navigator dizzy. Coby’s not just gaining power; he’s navigating love triangles – or should I say love octagons? – and forging bonds that are as unbreakable as Zoro’s willpower (you know, Nanimo Wakatta!) So, what are you waiting for? If you haven’t already, dive into this wild, unpredictable, and utterly entertaining journey with Coby. Expect laughs, thrills, spills, and maybe even a few tears. But most of all, expect a damn good time. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got more chapters to write, more skills to weave, and more adventures to plot. Yohoho!
"I'm a diehard fan so this ff is for diehard fan as well" might motivate you to read this one but never expect a fresh great world building, so better not putting your hopes up. It's just the mc 'coby' stole luffy's limelight. Please I know you can do better since you love one piece. Maybe try to read some referrence like "One Piece: Path of Power". That one is a good example of foreshadowing things SPOILER BELOW! I'm fine with mc have harem including nami and robin (18+) but if you make coby steals straw hat's main fight, killing enemies right on his face, at least have them get char growth or development. Their strength, thought process, are still mostly the same, which is very weird. Idk which part of you being diehard fan when all you did has no substance on what makes OP a great show. freaking copying every abilities without side-effect openly but no response from WG and Marines are already touching the bottom line. your attention to detail is odd if you did it without any foreshadowing.
I really like your writing, so I would like to ask for permission to translate this novel of yours into my language. [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
I just got to chapter 141 and I can say without fear, it's the best One Piece fanfiction story on the site, for those who have doubts, you can read it without fear, you won't regret it, I just got to the current chapters, so the The anxiety of waiting for the update is great, and please author-sama, don't abandon this story
SPOILER ALERT FOR FIRST FEW CHAPTER‼️ As you can read the ff description, Coby would be the crew member with system cheat. I'm not gonna talking about the butterfly effects (like rocky port incident and post-wano events), but there is one thing I should remind you guys. Coby has the ability to copy a spesific move, even from a devil fruit one (with a fair cost). Coby copied Luffy's pistol, and proclaimed himself as "Coby the copy ninja" to them. I can see in the future how vast this ability would go, so you need to get ready for some weird thing that might happen. Hope you guys doesn't badmouth the Author-sama for his/her decision.
Tiết lộ SpoilerHonest review. The story is decently written, but it suffers from all the problems a story such as this may have. Following the canon is always an issue when writing a story, even more so if it's almost like the character was just inserted into the main crew without replacing anything/anyone. The problem with this one is that there are some spontaneous skips that feels so iffy, because, well.. what happened/should happen was pretty much what the same as the canon. Unfortunately, as I just said, the spontaneous skips will always feel off as it ruins the flow of the story. The development with Nami was fine too but went downhill with Nojiko's. Still acceptable since it would be a bit hard considering how little time he has for that, but it's something to consider with the future developments with the other girls. Build-up is important in romance, unless you take away the romance and just make it purely carnal, but even that has its own needed developments, albeit shorter.
I really liked the story in the beginning and thought it was very good. The skill weaver system is OP and I liked it until you decided to make it possible for him to use devil fruit abilities through it, which I really don’t like. Except for this, the story is really good but just that is enough for me to not want to continue reading this story.
Did this author delete any reviews? There's only one 2-star review and one 3-star review, the rest are 4 stars or 5, why is this fanfic's rating so low? I'll try to read it, I've never read a fanfic with Coby Mc
So far I'm really loving this book, at first I just really liked the energy in the description and was interested, but now I can say I'm a fan that the book is written quite well, so great job author!
I really enjoyed this novel. I hope you don't stop, no matter how much people criticize you. Don't listen to negative opinions and be affected by them because they will hurt you.
Nice job so far Need more chapter Vdrvvrgvyodiyditdiyxyixoyxyocoyxyocyocyocyochocohchochochochochochochocohcjochochochocohchocohchochocgoxohcohxhochochlxlhxlhxlhxhoxhochocho
story was good until he started copying devil fruit powers it is a skill weaver system not copy system
Tiết lộ SpoilerNice story I hope have 1 chapter per day That enough jdhdjudhdhshshshshshshsbshhshsbsbhzhxhxbzbzhzhzhxhshshdhdjdhjjshdjdjdjdhdjdjdbsbjdjdjdbsbdhxhdhsbdhhddhhdhdhdhsh
Nice story so far I hope author can make fallow until current cannon in one piece and have ended too
take some free support, for your troublesㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
It's an interesting fan-fic with great potential.😌 Hehe I appreciate the dream and goal of the mc, can't wait to read the rest of the adventure.😁 Author can you just confirm that there is no ntr and yuri? I hate that sh**
Сам фанфик просто следует сюжету с несколькими изменениями. На любителя. Грамматика хорошая. Но пока не зацепило. Будет больше глав, может и изменю свое мнение.
This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story This fanfic is good if you are a luffy fanboy or a fanatic, good grammar, a good story
A good fanfic, it follows the canon but adds a nice touch to it, enough to make it more complex and fun, and with the romance added it makes it even better.
I like the idea. Haven't read any COby in one piece ff yet so this is new for me. Haven't read yet but I'm giving 5 stars for the sake of the wonderful idea and to appreciate the author. Gave all my power stones as well for the day. I'll go start reading when chapters reach 100, then I will go back to this review and edit it if needed. Good luck to the author and good job as well...
after seeing this in Manga i become even greater Coby Fan then i already was, im glad my favorite charakter on Marines side, Coby the Hero has so many fans and has storys writed about him.
voy a darle la oportunidad si me gusta seguiré apoyando al autor con piedras y mejorando la reseña [img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte][img=fuerte]
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Ahoy, fellow adventurers! It’s time for that traditional, totally unbiased, and shameless review from yours truly. You know, sometimes you just have to toot your own horn, and today, I’m blasting mine like Luffy yelling, “I’m gonna be King of the Pirates!” So far, the story has hit a whopping 100 chapters (yes, you heard that right!). Out of these, 55 chapters have already been uploaded to Patreon for all you eager beavers who just can’t wait. The rest? Well, they will be sailing your way soon. But let’s not forget, they’re still drafts – raw and uncut Now, let’s get to the good stuff – why this novel is absolutely, undeniably, and without a doubt...awesome! Skill Weaver System that lets him copy, blend, and mash up abilities like some sort of OP smoothie maker. Imagine a blender filled with Haki, sword skills, and devil fruit powers, all mixed to perfection. Tasty, right? Can't you just smell it? You can't well, then read and see! But this isn’t just a skill-fest. There’s heart, humor, and enough twists and turns to make even the most seasoned navigator dizzy. Coby’s not just gaining power; he’s navigating love triangles – or should I say love octagons? – and forging bonds that are as unbreakable as Zoro’s willpower (you know, Nanimo Wakatta!) So, what are you waiting for? If you haven’t already, dive into this wild, unpredictable, and utterly entertaining journey with Coby. Expect laughs, thrills, spills, and maybe even a few tears. But most of all, expect a damn good time. Now, if you’ll excuse me, I’ve got more chapters to write, more skills to weave, and more adventures to plot. Yohoho!