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typical Chinese fanfic with sentences such as "you are courting dead", "don't blame me for being impolite" and have Itachi with the "young master" personality.
Is this a translation or one of your originals? If it is a translation I would like to know the source
the plot feels very forced ,like the fact that everyone looks down on him, as well as the fact the character don't act like themselves, which could be remedied by calling this au so it's a minor issue
The concept is decent but some of the characters are so different and OOC that it is weird. Like Itachi is acting like a young master and it is just hard to read.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler
will wait for this story to be interesting. I am curious about how he will act.
If anyone knows the title of original or mtl - please write , id like to read ahead...................................................................
typical Chinese fanfic with sentences such as "you are courting dead", "don't blame me for being impolite" and have Itachi with the "young master" personality.
Is this a translation or one of your originals? If it is a translation I would like to know the source
the plot feels very forced ,like the fact that everyone looks down on him, as well as the fact the character don't act like themselves, which could be remedied by calling this au so it's a minor issue
The concept is decent but some of the characters are so different and OOC that it is weird. Like Itachi is acting like a young master and it is just hard to read.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler will wait for this story to be interesting. I am curious about how he will act.
If anyone knows the title of original or mtl - please write , id like to read ahead...................................................................