A winner in life at Tōtsuki academy

LV 14

DetachedDreamer

Love the anime, MC seems like a quality one but I can't get past the language the author has. its impressive knowing more than one language but that impressiveness doesn't help the poor dialogue, I spend most my time trying to translate what they are trying to say then confused on why they said it. some of whats said, doesn't make sense or comes out of no where, wondering why it was said at all. I bet if the author wrote in his native language this story would be a banger, it'd make more sense and would clear up misunderstandings im having but im unable to move forward with how it is at the moment.

LV 4

Don_Cheeto12

Is this a chinese translation cuz it feels like one. I don't like Chinese translations.

LV 3

Supreme_Dragon_God

As an author, I feel obligated to give 5 stars, and please only do a review after reading at least 10 chapters, ok?

LV 2

Wruthor

I decided that I will translate this Fanfic myself. The author did a great job but I want to improve it. So, no offense. I just need it to be better.

LV 1

_Phali_Akashi

Vamos lá ajudar mais um compatriota 🇧🇷. Não comecei a ler ainda mas pelos comentários o "lixo" chinês foi removido e mc não é um "estrupador"

LV 4

Theory18

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LV 4

hyuse888

The first first time time is is the first