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Pretty good story, but the way you wrote dialogs made me stop reading it. It was tiring to figure out who was talking and who was responding.
man this is weird AF. The mc is one of the densest mcs I have seen in my entire life, but I still can't stop reading, the idea is solid, although I'm afraid it can get really old after a while, the only problem is writing the dialogue, it can be better
I have only one problem the way you write the dialogues. The rest of that doesn't matter
Gostei da história ser rápido demais da ruim kkk precisa ser lento não não pegar garotas como pokémons kkk I liked the story being too fast, it's bad lol it needs to be slow, don't get girls like Pokémon lol
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Pretty good story, but the way you wrote dialogs made me stop reading it. It was tiring to figure out who was talking and who was responding.
man this is weird AF. The mc is one of the densest mcs I have seen in my entire life, but I still can't stop reading, the idea is solid, although I'm afraid it can get really old after a while, the only problem is writing the dialogue, it can be better
I have only one problem the way you write the dialogues. The rest of that doesn't matter
Gostei da história ser rápido demais da ruim kkk precisa ser lento não não pegar garotas como pokémons kkk I liked the story being too fast, it's bad lol it needs to be slow, don't get girls like Pokémon lol
200 gems = bonus chapter 20 comments per chapter = bonus chapter 10 reviews = bonus chapter 3 patreon subscriptions = 10 bonus chapters